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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 3:50 pm    Post subject: Covenant dance Reply with quote

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Covenant dance
Posted by Agnischief@ (Agnischief@)
30 October 2005, 3:13 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Agnischief@1030051513431.html
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe, kinda of funny. Makes me think of Elites doing breakdancing or something.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 12:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

At least make it rhyme properly...
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Umm... Wow I really don't know what possessed you to submit so much below par writing instead of just working on one at a time till each is good.

Please do yourself a favor and work harder and focus more on individual work.

Caleb
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 12:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Covenant Dance is a track from the Halo soundtrack and I don't think this would go well with it. It doesn't sound to, hmmm.... what's the word I'm looking for, Covenanty
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caleb the Jackal wrote:
Umm... Wow I really don't know what possessed you to submit so much below par writing instead of just working on one at a time till each is good.

Please do yourself a favor and work harder and focus more on individual work.

Caleb
While I agree with you, Cal, I think we (all of us) should go easier on the newbs, I mean, even a little criticism nowadays can turn the nicest newb into a n00by prink, so lets be kind. He was right though, next time, put more into your work, then submit it. I'll be looking out for it.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 1:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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While I agree with you, Cal, I think we (all of us) should go easier on the newbs, I mean, even a little criticism nowadays can turn the nicest newb into a n00by prink, so lets be kind. He was right though, next time, put more into your work, then submit it. I'll be looking out for it.


-- . . . and did that make the song any better, CDW? No! Smile newbs do have it hard, though, eh? It's like your first day at a new school.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

if it rhymed better and had some more inter...

hell what am i doing.

that sucked.

work on it
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