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hboff
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Tin Can Man
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| Hehe, kinda of funny. Makes me think of Elites doing breakdancing or something. |
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Wellington
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| At least make it rhyme properly... |
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Caleb the Jackal
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Umm... Wow I really don't know what possessed you to submit so much below par writing instead of just working on one at a time till each is good.
Please do yourself a favor and work harder and focus more on individual work.
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Michael Archer
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| The Covenant Dance is a track from the Halo soundtrack and I don't think this would go well with it. It doesn't sound to, hmmm.... what's the word I'm looking for, Covenanty |
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Commander Demitri Wolf
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| Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:39 am Post subject: |
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| Caleb the Jackal wrote: | Umm... Wow I really don't know what possessed you to submit so much below par writing instead of just working on one at a time till each is good.
Please do yourself a favor and work harder and focus more on individual work.
Caleb |
While I agree with you, Cal, I think we (all of us) should go easier on the newbs, I mean, even a little criticism nowadays can turn the nicest newb into a n00by prink, so lets be kind. He was right though, next time, put more into your work, then submit it. I'll be looking out for it. |
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(Na)Marl
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| Quote: | | While I agree with you, Cal, I think we (all of us) should go easier on the newbs, I mean, even a little criticism nowadays can turn the nicest newb into a n00by prink, so lets be kind. He was right though, next time, put more into your work, then submit it. I'll be looking out for it. |
-- . . . and did that make the song any better, CDW? No!  newbs do have it hard, though, eh? It's like your first day at a new school. |
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my head is gone
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| Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:27 am Post subject: |
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if it rhymed better and had some more inter...
hell what am i doing.
that sucked.
work on it |
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