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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 3:50 pm    Post subject: p2. williams Reply with quote

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Posted by Agnischief@ (mjblatter@verision.net)
30 October 2005, 2:50 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Agnischief@1030051450011.html
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Too short. And never list within the story like that. Very unprofessional. Add some length to these and use the Code. Also don't post three stories at the same time.

Take more time and effort and do better next time.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

no chance in hell that most people here will be able to make heads or tails of it.

myself included.
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