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PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 3:41 pm    Post subject: By the Fires of the Night Reply with quote
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By the Fires of the Night
Posted by Arthur Wellesley (arthur_wellesly@hotmail.com)
21 October 2005, 12:55 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle1021050055011.html
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 1:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very good. You had some nice rhymes in there, though there were also a few flow issues. You seem to be pretty gifted in poems. It painted a pretty detailed picture.
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