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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 6:26 pm    Post subject: Love, Death, and Coupons Reply with quote

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Love, Death, and Coupons
Posted by SeverianofUrth (severn117@gmail.com)
13 October 2005, 5:45 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=SeverianofUr1013051745341.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You one crazy mother fucker.

As usual, I am left to wonder what exactly your talking about, if anything in this case. I saw hints of Dr Halsey and 117, and Kelly.

You left me...interested.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Funny. I like how you winked at the conventions of poetry. Good job and no complaints.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe, pretty funny. Nice one, Sev. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What have I got to say to this?

It's awesome. Purely. I really love poetry, although I rarely have hints to improve it. I really love how it seems so laid-back and easy with Sev, yet it's got, an, uhm... undertone to it.

How would I rate it?
- A Hell Yeah.

No doubt about it.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It was... interesting. I liked it, though I did notice a few discrepencies in the rhyme scheme.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 3:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rhyme scheme all the way to the bank!

...

Good job, Severian, you gotta get more shit like this out - it reminds me of the good ol' days.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The chief might not have taken pills, but you were when you wrote this you crazy *watch yo mouth*-- but I'm talking about Sev *then we can dig it*.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 5:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Honestly, I thought MasterSushi wrote this before I saw the author. Normally, I don't really like petry but this one was awesome!

The Chief Might Have taken Pills...

CHIEF: How did you know!?!?!?!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 2:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ohhhhhhhhhhhkayyyyyyyyyyy.........

that was... "Unique".

Nice.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, thanks, everyone. I wrote this out when I was stuck plodding through a story on Siddhartha. And its about the Chief, Cortana, the next game, Eliot, and the possibility that the entire trilogy of games might just be a narcotics-fueled fantasy by a sleeping boy named John. Who is pale and sallow, of course.

Again, thanks, guys. (and Nick... haven't seen you around here for a while, bud.) And dark, thanks for what I think were the compliments. Same goes for you, Mr. Mainevent ('cause I hope you were digging it).
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I did enjoy the poem mate, don't you worry. It was in standard "you" fashion.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You bet little John's drugs were Tamiflu. Razz

Oh, and Sev. Good work. The others said most of it, just keep the pressure on it without killing yourself. Wink


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

--Ha! What the hell was that?! That was freaking genius!
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I almost missed this one, very....interesting to say the least....
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