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Love, Death, and Coupons
Posted by SeverianofUrth (severn117@gmail.com)
13 October 2005, 5:45 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=SeverianofUr1013051745341.html

thedarkfire · Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:19 pm Post subject:

You one crazy mother fucker.

As usual, I am left to wonder what exactly your talking about, if anything in this case. I saw hints of Dr Halsey and 117, and Kelly.

You left me...interested.

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:45 pm Post subject:

Funny. I like how you winked at the conventions of poetry. Good job and no complaints.

C.T. Clown

Nick Kang · Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:08 pm Post subject:

Hehe, pretty funny. Nice one, Sev. Wink

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SYSTEM · Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:20 pm Post subject:

What have I got to say to this?

It's awesome. Purely. I really love poetry, although I rarely have hints to improve it. I really love how it seems so laid-back and easy with Sev, yet it's got, an, uhm... undertone to it.

How would I rate it?

- A Hell Yeah.

No doubt about it.

- Dave.
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Wellington · Member Joined: 30 Sep 2005 Posts: 110 Location: Canada

It was... interesting. I liked it, though I did notice a few discrepencies in the rhyme scheme.

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 3:20 am Post subject:

Rhyme scheme all the way to the bank!

...

Good job, Severian, you gotta get more shit like this out - it reminds me of the good ol' days.

Mainevent · Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:04 am Post subject:

The chief might not have taken pills, but you were when you wrote this you crazy *watch yo mouth*-- but I'm talking about Sev *then we can dig it*.

Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 5:12 pm Post subject:

Honestly, I thought MasterSushi wrote this before I saw the author. Normally, I don't really like petry but this one was awesome!

The Chief Might Have taken Pills...

CHIEF: How did you know!?!?!?!

Csp499 · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 2:53 am Post subject:

Ohhhhhhhhhhhkayyyyyyyyyyy.........

that was... "Unique".

Nice.

SeverianofUrth · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:05 pm Post subject:

Well, thanks, everyone. I wrote this out when I was stuck plodding through a story on Siddhartha. And its about the Chief, Cortana, the next game, Eliot, and the possibility that the entire trilogy of games might just be a narcotics-fueled fantasy by a sleeping boy named John. Who is pale and sallow, of course.

Again, thanks, guys. (and Nick... haven't seen you around here for a while, bud.) And dark, thanks for what I think were the compliments. Same goes for you, Mr. Mainevent ('cause I hope you were digging it).

thedarkfire · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:37 pm Post subject:

I did enjoy the poem mate, don't you worry. It was in standard "you" fashion.

JCDentonCZ · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:48 pm Post subject:

You bet little John's drugs were Tamiflu. Razz

Oh, and Sev. Good work. The others said most of it, just keep the pressure on it without killing yourself. Wink

- JC
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(Na)Marl · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:53 pm Post subject:

--Ha! What the hell was that?! That was freaking genius!

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 9:11 pm Post subject:

I almost missed this one, very....interesting to say the least....