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hboff Site Admin
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Tanner Wiseman Member
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:21 am Post subject: |
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I really enjoyed your story. It has significantly more depth than some I've read and lets you into the characters' mind. You also use some excellent detail and colorful adjectives. The marines are also presented as real people, instead of mindless killers.
I would like to hear more about the Siege of Palatine. So keep writing.
Also, I admire the fact that you arn't afraid to drop the F-Bomb  |
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Wellington Member
Joined: 30 Sep 2005 Posts: 110 Location: Canada
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 11:48 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks man, appreciated!  |
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