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PostPosted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 7:11 pm    Post subject: The Machine inside Reply with quote
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The Machine inside
Posted by AI Construct (Death_Of_A_God@hotmail.com)
7 October 2005, 1:55 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=AI_Construct1007050155591.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Where to start. Firstly capitalize your names. Also more detail. So what if he captain has an ego? Has he got blue eyes? What colour's his hair? And so on.
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