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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:42 pm    Post subject: Twilight Reply with quote

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Twilight
Posted by Chuckles
2 October 2005, 1:27 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Chuckles1002051327141.html
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

- Either my face just got frozen with botox or Chuckles posted a poem!

Heh, I think it's the latter.

I like the symbol of clay to mold and shape. It's so fitting, as once clay hardens, it can never be turned back. That's just like what happened to the Master Chief, and I figured that was probably one of the better and deeper symbols on HBO.

Loving it, Chuck.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mr Clown's second poem am I right? Yeah, great use of words Chuckles, congratulations.

Now for my poem-exclusive rating system: 9/10. You could have got 10 but there were no Wookies.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is really good, Chuck!

Now, why don't you make some more like that?

Keep up the awesome work!

\../ Twisted Evil \../

Rock on!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

CDW wrote:
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Mr Clown's second poem am I right?

Fifth. One in Swampcandle, one in The Return, Voices of the Dead: A Poem of Erebus and Wise and this one. The first two were integrated into a chapter, so you wouldn't see them unless you knew where to look. The one from Swampcandle is probably the least read, but I really like it. In fact, here it is:
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Melted ice, a formless cold,
Is life to death, when life is poured.
Flows away, a form undone,
Pray it wakes, it walks no more.
At times the shape may yet be found,
The swamp it holds, decay confounds,
Still life is stayed, is poured away,
It melts into the soured ground.
What rises walks but wakes no more,
It's lifeless life was lived before.
And seek it not, and touch it not,
'Tis evil now, and life no more

C.T. Clown
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like your style Chuck. I wish...


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 10:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I remember Voices of the Dead, and kind of spamming its comments thread with the Simpsons hehe. Once again, good work, hope you bring out a brand spankin' new horror series, well maybe a comedy. Now that'd be interesting.....
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It would probably have really dark humour though.
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