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Alein Brethren: Chapter 4: Assault on Zanzibar

 
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:42 pm    Post subject: Alein Brethren: Chapter 4: Assault on Zanzibar Reply with quote

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Posted by Alex L (Greek Elite) (yoshi64y@aol.com)
1 October 2005, 12:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_L_Greek1001050029091.html
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey now! This was a great chapter. The action flowed nicely. Basically I had a problem with the death of the white elite, he would survive a plasma gernade. Otherwise nice job on this! Very Happy 9.4/10
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 1:09 pm    Post subject: Story Reply with quote

What the heck is up with that grenade on the White Elite?

That was totally cheap...I liked the white ones...

Anyway good job... nice chapter...

Keep it up I am still reading the others...
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:02 pm    Post subject: Story Reply with quote

Are you going to kill Batronus? Maybe I'll start to like him...
Elites hate Brutes...
I hate Brutes...
I have a theory Elite about the conclusion...
Batronus vs. Alei with Baxter in the middle.
Just a theory.
Continue. Alei Rocks!
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