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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 1:03 pm    Post subject: Xentorians Unleashed Reply with quote

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Xentorians Unleashed
Posted by Nick (Altegar@comcast.net)
17 September 2004, 9:46 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=nick.0917042146182.html
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Worse than the first but don't be put down. Keep it up. Just better.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 10:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm going with my other comments.

Work out your storyline. Xentorians I think would be Covenant (did you just make up a name for them?). And... just read my (and the other) other comment and you'll do fine (as long as you follow them anyway).
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