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An Unggoy Life: Chapter 25: Battle For The Ark
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
16 September 2005, 2:14 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0916051414091.html

Guardian · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 2:23 am Post subject:

You just pulled of a Matrix Rip-off

NOT cool man, not cool at all.

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:31 pm Post subject:

Sort of (been watching Matrix Reloaded lately, couldn't resist)

SYSTEM · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:33 pm Post subject:

Then be sure to cite your sources, and identify them. Remember that an uncited source can still count as plagarism/piggybacking, which is frowned upon.

There's a guide on piggybacking, it's quite important.

- Dave.
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CrazyGrunt · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 11:05 pm Post subject:

I'll keep that in mind. (Even though I don't think the producers of the Matrix are going to sue me for it.)

gruntyking117 · Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 12:54 am Post subject:

Well, huh. Nice. Needs a little more detail. I never watched the Matrix much, thought it was crap the first time I saw it. But how is Grievous a Forunner?

Swift'n'Painful · Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 1:00 pm Post subject:

I don't really know how everyone else was only saying Matrix, when Lord of the Rings nad Star Wars III was clearly in there. The only Matrix reference that I saw was Grievous doing the Neo move.

All in all, it was ok...

Just try to elaborate next time because there were plenty of areas that could have been expanded on.