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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 2:32 pm    Post subject: Virus Found Reply with quote

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Posted by Mainevent
13 September 2005, 2:35 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0913050235591.html
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...I honestly don't know what happened....

This isn't even half of what I submitted.

It was all in the submission box, and I attempted to 'Try Again' several times, and thought that perhaps there was just a limit to what it would show in the cursory glance over.

Odd. I'll try again.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

mainevent, i love you...
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay guys, I found the problem and told Wu about it. Hopefully this will all be cleared up soon.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I guess I will review it when it all comes in...? Whenever that will be.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can't even use the submission form at the moment, weird.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What browsers are you guys using?
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great story, it tied up all the loose ends.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, Main. I was going to read this, but, as you seem to have encountered a problem, I will wait until the full version comes out, as to not miss anything.

Let me know when you get things straightened out.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Full version or not, this story was fascinating. FASCINATING. Looking forward to the rest of it.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

duckfoot your really scaring me!
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All right guys; everything should be fixed. Read away.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Big ups, Main. I did notice one small mistake, "Firewalled behind Caliph's firewall", or something like that. But other than that, it was excellent.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

John shouldn't be out of his armor like that.

it was good, the ending confused me. I didn't know who was talking to who.

John - Cortana
John - Linda (through a telepathic link)
John - flood - linda.

so confusing, four hours of sleep will do that to me.

I'll give you a 9.5/10 because of the confusion at the end.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

To Ster: DOH!

To Shadow: There's a reason John was out of armor, and it comes up in the follow up "series". Basically two different story arcs that are part of the same thing.

And at the end it was John (bold and italics), Linda (bold), and Flood (italics).
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