HBO Fan Fiction

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Virus Found
Posted by Mainevent
13 September 2005, 2:35 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0913050235591.html

Mainevent · Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:49 pm Post subject:

...I honestly don't know what happened....

This isn't even half of what I submitted.

It was all in the submission box, and I attempted to 'Try Again' several times, and thought that perhaps there was just a limit to what it would show in the cursory glance over.

Odd. I'll try again.

duckfoot · Member Joined: 09 Sep 2005 Posts: 4

mainevent, i love you...

Mainevent · Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:34 pm Post subject:

Okay guys, I found the problem and told Wu about it. Hopefully this will all be cleared up soon.

Pooman · Member Joined: 18 Aug 2005 Posts: 86 Location: Kentucky

I guess I will review it when it all comes in...? Whenever that will be.

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:55 pm Post subject:

I can't even use the submission form at the moment, weird.

Sterfrye36 · Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:07 pm Post subject:

What browsers are you guys using?
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Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:34 pm Post subject:

Great story, it tied up all the loose ends.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Alright, Main. I was going to read this, but, as you seem to have encountered a problem, I will wait until the full version comes out, as to not miss anything.

Let me know when you get things straightened out.
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Random 14-Year-Old · Member Joined: 20 Jan 2005 Posts: 81 Location: California

Full version or not, this story was fascinating. FASCINATING. Looking forward to the rest of it.

Giggles the Grunt · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:14 am Post subject:

duckfoot your really scaring me!

Mainevent · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:16 am Post subject:

All right guys; everything should be fixed. Read away.

Sterfrye36 · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:14 am Post subject:

Big ups, Main. I did notice one small mistake, "Firewalled behind Caliph's firewall", or something like that. But other than that, it was excellent.
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Guardian · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:16 am Post subject:

John shouldn't be out of his armor like that.

it was good, the ending confused me. I didn't know who was talking to who.

John - Cortana
John - Linda (through a telepathic link)
John - flood - linda.

so confusing, four hours of sleep will do that to me.

I'll give you a 9.5/10 because of the confusion at the end.

Mainevent · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:19 am Post subject:

To Ster: DOH!

To Shadow: There's a reason John was out of armor, and it comes up in the follow up "series". Basically two different story arcs that are part of the same thing.

And at the end it was John (bold and italics), Linda (bold), and Flood (italics).