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Glass and Steel: Pt. 7

 
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 4:31 pm    Post subject: Glass and Steel: Pt. 7 Reply with quote

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Glass and Steel: Pt. 7
Posted by Random 14-Year-Old (i-rule-2008@sbcglobal.net)
11 September 2005, 8:12 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Random_14-Ye0911050812241.html
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great Story again. Kinda dark though. And know the title is starting to fit with the story.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Did you write this chapter in several parts?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark, eh? Expect it get a lot more dark than that, though. That was just the tip of the darkety-dark iceberg.

I'm beginning to realize how long this story could go on. At first I had planned a simple 3-part trilogy, but now I'm looking at several more than what I've done already. In fact, I've never really had real characters established in an epic, so hell, even a spin-off seems possible. I even hinted at that in this installment, too.

Several parts? I'm not sure I know what you mean?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I mean, did you write part of it, stop, and then write the rest later?
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 12:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So Mrs. Jilles clawed at his face and got shot in the head.

Heh, she so had that coming. Granted panic makes people do stupid things, i'd have listened if i were in that situation.

The story was good, i didn't find really any GPS which was really good. Take care of HBOFF for us would ya?
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 1:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, sdn, I think I did, I do that with pretty much every chapter. Mainly because I don't have extended amounts of time, but also because my writing begins to falter if I write too much at one time.

Well...I've thought about it, and it's gonna happen. I realize that I started the story with zero background on the characters and I hardly even had them developed in my imagination yet, so I'm gonna write a couple quick spinoffs soon that cough up some background. Nothing really related to the real plot, just some interesting stuff. So keep an eye out for that.

Damn lady deserved to die, she was so annoying. Wink Oh, wait, that murder was supposed to inspire sympathy, not satisfaction. Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah my writing begins to falter if write for long periods too. And yes, in some ways, the D*mn lady was annoying. When the guy had everyone at gunpoint I thought Ren was gonna try to use the energy sword though.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 3:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

pretty good again.
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