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An Unggoy Life: Chapter 20: Welcome to Armageddon

 
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 11:15 am    Post subject: An Unggoy Life: Chapter 20: Welcome to Armageddon Reply with quote

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An Unggoy Life: Chapter 20: Welcome to Armageddon
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
1 September 2005, 2:39 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0901051439321.html
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 2:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter Summary:
Pillar of Autumn II arrives at Armageddon, and Lord Grievous and co follow shortly after and begin invading. Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, whoa, whoa, whoa.

Don't spoil the plot for us there, CG. The thing is, remember, as many of my colleagues say: Show, don't tell. You've probably heard this before, but remember that unless you're putting up an idea, don't spoil the plot.

In other words, let us read through, we'll see it. You won't need to explain things if everything's bound up right.

Good luck.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 10:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Confused Question Question
Dave, your telling me not to spoil it, but mainevent is telling me that I care!
The reason I even post first here is because no even posts comments about my series anymore.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2005 10:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well,

Lots of improvement since I last saw yer stuff. Doing good, keep it up.

Don't worry, CG. People will come. Just keep persisting, and you'll do fine.

- Dave.
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"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2005 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope so!
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