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An Unggoy Life: Chapter 20: Welcome to Armageddon
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
1 September 2005, 2:39 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0901051439321.html

[CrazyGrunt]

Chapter Summary:
Pillar of Autumn II arrives at Armageddon, and Lord Grievous and co follow shortly after and begin invading.

[SYSTEM]

Hey, whoa, whoa, whoa.

Don't spoil the plot for us there, CG. The thing is, remember, as many of my colleagues say: Show, don't tell. You've probably heard this before, but remember that unless you're putting up an idea, don't spoil the plot.

In other words, let us read through, we'll see it. You won't need to explain things if everything's bound up right.

Good luck.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

[CrazyGrunt]

Dave, your telling me not to spoil it, but mainevent is telling me that I care!
The reason I even post first here is because no even posts comments about my series anymore.

[SYSTEM]

Well,

Lots of improvement since I last saw yer stuff. Doing good, keep it up.

Don't worry, CG. People will come. Just keep persisting, and you'll do fine.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

[CrazyGrunt]

I hope so!