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Week 2 in the life of a noob
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 1:57 pm    Post subject: Week 2 in the life of a noob Reply with quote

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Week 2 in the life of a noob
Posted by Wasabe (modemboyii@msn.com)
29 August 2005, 6:06 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Wasabe0829051806541.html
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!! Oh man that story is so funny! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 3:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was pretty funny.

Lol, the ghost.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 3:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ab.
So.
Lute.
Ly.
Hi.
Lar.
I.
Ous.

Lemme just wipe all the drink I spewed out of my mouth offa my shirt. . . .

Well. That was very good Very Happy

You're fuuuurrrrrny, and that's all which matters.

The Code might be nice, to spice it up, but it was a thousand times better than your first, and your first was side splitting.

Now, I'm off to get some pills to stop me pissing myself. . .
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 4:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty good.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 5:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats really funny, well more ideas for my story.....hm...ghost eh?
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

--That was pretty funny, and man, you realize how big of jerks people are! Though you are talented at making people laugh, I think you should brush up on your typing skills. You made a small error at the beginning, so be sure to proofread. Oh, and don't forget to read about the Code! Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 4:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quite funny man. If you only had a few more days added on...
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wu was right, day eight is good. Nice, I like this.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 5:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked the whole interaction between the noob and the player with the friend request, and you finished it off amazingly too by saying you laughed because he wrote down his friends on a list. Oh, man that was good, and it surprised me because I don't usually laugh at this stuff.

Your first paragraph, however, seemed (to me) to be too similar to the de-leveling thing, but it did get funnier a couple sentences in.

Not bad, Wasabe, keep it up.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 11:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wasabe? Coincidence I suppose. Roasted seaweed. . . . . Goes well with Sushi. . . .

Or maybe you're Wasabe-Chiba! In which case it's an honour to meet you. But I doubt that. I'm a little crazy today, ignore me.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh. My. God! I was laughing all the way through this, it's realy great, keep it up.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It was fairly funny.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What is this "code" you guys are talking about?
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Check out the link in my signature. That explains it all.
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