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hboff Site Admin
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Zephyr Member

Joined: 25 May 2005 Posts: 275 Location: im at ur moms house lol
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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Again with the very small length. And the locator caps. _________________ For what is a man profited, if he should gain the whole world, but lose his soul? |
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CrazyGrunt Member
Joined: 17 Aug 2005 Posts: 63 Location: Wreaking havoc on High Charity
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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Again I submitted those chapters before I found the comments page. Worry not, the chapters after this will have less locator caps. That, plus more detail when I describe a person, ship, planet, and so on. |
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Tin Can Man Member
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:30 am Post subject: |
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| Was the Trafalgar a ship in FoR, or did you make it up? |
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Mainevent Member
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:32 am Post subject: |
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| The Trafalgar was a British ship commanded by, I believe, Horation Nelson. I'm not sure about that last part so don't quote me. |
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Tin Can Man Member
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:33 am Post subject: |
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| I know that the Trafalgar was a ship. I think sometime around the world wars. |
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MjolnirMarkVMC Member
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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The supercarrier Trafalgar was one of the mightiest ships in the UNSC Navy. It was destroyed at during the battle above Reach in 2552. Nice story a little imaginative with the Star Wars-Halo-Ork crossover but im hooked  |
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Syotica Moderator

Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Posts: 579 Location: Northern Michigan
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:48 pm Post subject: |
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| Well. Original, yes, but needed alot of decent work. Too tired to go over it. |
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CrazyGrunt Member
Joined: 17 Aug 2005 Posts: 63 Location: Wreaking havoc on High Charity
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:59 am Post subject: |
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What do mean, master chief? There was only one locator cap in this chapter. ??? |
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