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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 14: A Very Bad Day

 
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:14 pm    Post subject: A Unngoy Life: Chapter 14: A Very Bad Day Reply with quote
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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 14: A Very Bad Day
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
15 August 2005, 5:45 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0815051745161.html
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It was far too short. Those locator caps didn everything they weren't supposed to do. Locator caps are fine, but only if you show us the descriptions in the actual writing.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 5:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yeah, about that. I kinda found the comments page after I had submitted chapters 14 and 15. Embarassed

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 6:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Why did you underline so many things? If you're trying to mark them as ships, use italics.
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