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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:27 pm    Post subject: Terminal Danger Reply with quote

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Terminal Danger
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13 August 2005, 7:01 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0813051901311.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 4:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 6:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, this was very unique. I don't think I've seen a fic done in this sort of style before. It was very script-like with the audio transmission, and I liked it a lot, because this actually helped build an atmosphere.

Well-written and intriguing. Nice job!

Oh, and I must say that this update is one helluva batch.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really good story, I especially liked the Marine dialogue. It reminded me of that long cutscene in 343GS when Keyes and Johnson are attacked by the Flood.

9.25/10

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very interesting. Is there going to be another part?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 11:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm planning on it.

Any familiar faces make a cameo here you see?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 11:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

'Nosolee wrote:
Really good story, I especially liked the Marine dialogue. It reminded me of that long cutscene in 343GS when Keyes and Johnson are attacked by the Flood.

9.25/10

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I was hoping someone would say that, as it's partially what I modeled that section off of.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Patterson. Congratulations on the promotion. Only wish I could be there. Recent events have kept me from fulfilling prior obligations. Though I shouldn't be much longer here. As always, good to talk to you. Next time I'll be sure not to bail. Adios.


Cortana! Very Happy Good one Main.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, this was great, yeah CoLd's right some great stuff *cough*mine*cough*. Yeah, nmore quality like this stuff would be great.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 1:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very original. Reminded me of those "letters from Cortana," when H1 was coming out. Told a brief, but highly engrossing, story.

Big ups to this one. You broke new ground and are to be commended.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really liked it. It reminded me forcefully of the cutscene in 343 GS where we first discover the Flood, too.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Corperal Perez, from Halo 2. Voiceover by Tim Dadabo.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

interesting really different

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Perez is a familiar name, but I was thinking of someone else. This person doesn't stand out much in this story, but may or may not figure more prominently in future stories.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I assume they're being attacked by flood...

Or flood genetically altered by the government perhaps?

Or a group of angry escaped grunts?

Only time will tell.
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