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Terminal Danger
Posted by Mainevent
13 August 2005, 7:01 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0813051901311.html

Syotica · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 4:24 pm Post subject:

Nice!
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CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 6:04 pm Post subject:

Wow, this was very unique. I don't think I've seen a fic done in this sort of style before. It was very script-like with the audio transmission, and I liked it a lot, because this actually helped build an atmosphere.

Well-written and intriguing. Nice job!

Oh, and I must say that this update is one helluva batch.

'Nosolee · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 73 Location: Manhattan

Really good story, I especially liked the Marine dialogue. It reminded me of that long cutscene in 343GS when Keyes and Johnson are attacked by the Flood.

9.25/10

-'Nos

Solidus Snake · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:42 pm Post subject:

Very interesting. Is there going to be another part?

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 11:23 pm Post subject:

I'm planning on it.

Any familiar faces make a cameo here you see?

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 11:41 pm Post subject:

Tin Can Man · Member Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Posts: 170

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:55 am Post subject:

Wow, this was great, yeah CoLd's right some great stuff *cough*mine*cough*. Yeah, nmore quality like this stuff would be great.

Azrael · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 504 Location: Boston

Very original. Reminded me of those "letters from Cortana," when H1 was coming out. Told a brief, but highly engrossing, story.

Big ups to this one. You broke new ground and are to be commended.

Az
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Zephyr · Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 5:05 pm Post subject:

I really liked it. It reminded me forcefully of the cutscene in 343 GS where we first discover the Flood, too.
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Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:43 pm Post subject:

Corperal Perez, from Halo 2. Voiceover by Tim Dadabo.

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

interesting really different

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Mainevent · Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:22 am Post subject:

Perez is a familiar name, but I was thinking of someone else. This person doesn't stand out much in this story, but may or may not figure more prominently in future stories.

'Nosolee · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 73 Location: Manhattan

I assume they're being attacked by flood...

Or flood genetically altered by the government perhaps?

Or a group of angry escaped grunts?

Only time will tell.