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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 13: It Couldn't Be Worse...
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
13 August 2005, 5:55 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0813051755081.html

Zephyr · Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:40 am Post subject:

No, no I don't suppose it could. It's getting very grim..
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CrazyGrunt · Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 3:38 am Post subject: heh...

Hello HBO! You're all probably thinking that I'm an ignorant git. Well, you're wrong. Its just that I didn't find out about the comments board until now Embarassed

Syotica · Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 10:29 pm Post subject:

Another wacky story that has no plot or inguenity. I don't know how, but I'm addicted.

Try and add some feel to those characters son. Make me care about them. You know? Plot progression. Use it.

Zephyr · Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:14 pm Post subject:

Welcome Crazygrunt.
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CrazyGrunt · Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:47 am Post subject: Oops!

I just realized something wrong in my spelling when I was writing Chapter 16 for the series. Shocked

Unggoy is spelled Unggoy, not Unngoy. Embarassed

So the next few chapters, besides 14 and 15, which have been submitted already, are goning to have the title: An Unggoy Life:Chapter __:____