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At the End of the Tunnel: A Poem

 
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 3:00 pm    Post subject: At the End of the Tunnel: A Poem Reply with quote
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At the End of the Tunnel: A Poem
Posted by Xaos Rapture (rahke@hotmail.com)
8 September 2004, 12:46 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=xaos_rapture.0908040046351.html
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 4:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Okay. Well, it seemed a little... jumpy, like not very smooth like. I suppose is was alright, but keep working.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 9:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
it was ok. dont know what the word is for it
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
i liked it, would have prefered direct Halo terms and the such.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 10:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
i liked it, would have prefered direct Halo terms and the such.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Helljumper wrote:
i liked it, would have prefered direct Halo terms and the such.

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Ya, but it was good, just put in some more... haloish words, or terms.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 10:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Interesting. Not bad, just interesting.

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