HBO Fan Fiction

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A marines outlook
Posted by kinggun (kingsizemarsbar@msn.com)
25 July 2005, 9:04 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=kinggun0725052104101.html

Boy.I.Like.Halo · Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 6:56 pm Post subject:

Very good. It must have taken long to think of those good rymes.

Solidus Snake · Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:01 pm Post subject:

That's really good man.

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:34 pm Post subject:

Well done. Some might criticize you for the varying lengths of your lines, but I like poetry that goes its own way. Good, thoughtful writing. Hope to see some more from you.

C.T. Clown