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The Six Generals: General Goyer
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:24 pm    Post subject: The Six Generals: General Goyer Reply with quote

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The Six Generals: General Goyer
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23 July 2005, 5:49 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0723050549541.html
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty cool. Could use code more but its still pretty good.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Telling Mainevent to use more code? Dude, that's like telling the Pope he needs more extravagant clothes. Or telling Lance Armstrong to get off his butt and win a race.

I liked this one Main, I'm looking forward to the next one, and hopefully some answers.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Who knows, you might even get some.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Should have made a background on the crazy Spartan why he went mad. Anyways, good story, and hopefully the next part will answer my guestion.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

All will be clear in time.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

And in time I will wait.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe, I actually find it funny that you thought David was crazy. I hadn't anticipated that. Though, in retrospect, I guess he is a bit off-the-chain.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh really, well I thought you meant to make him crazy and that made it interesting to me. Well it still rocks man.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I meant to make him somewhat mean and excessively violent against others, but not necessarily crazy.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i didnt think he was crazy. just thought he was doing his mission. still liked it. always like mains stuff.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well done. You nearly lost me at the gymnastics feat near the beginning, but all in all I really enjoyed this. Here we go with a quasi-renegade Spartan story. Make him fight the Clowns. Very Happy

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But today, this man was his enemy, and Sixty-Six had never sympathized with his enemies; never.

...Best sentence in the chapter. Cut and dry, done and done. Spartan sentence...Az likey.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 1:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good. But hard to understand. Which is why I'm dying for more. Please hurry up the next one!(But not enough that the quality is in any way diminished.)
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can see why it's hard to understand- because in a way I tried to make it that way. Especially during the fall. I tried to get the confusion and such of falling.

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