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The Six Generals: General Goyer
Posted by Mainevent
23 July 2005, 5:49 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent0723050549541.html

Syotica · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:46 pm Post subject:

Good.

Boy.I.Like.Halo · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:48 pm Post subject:

Pretty cool. Could use code more but its still pretty good.

HELSING · Member Joined: 21 Jan 2005 Posts: 151

Telling Mainevent to use more code? Dude, that's like telling the Pope he needs more extravagant clothes. Or telling Lance Armstrong to get off his butt and win a race.

I liked this one Main, I'm looking forward to the next one, and hopefully some answers.

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:00 pm Post subject:

Who knows, you might even get some.

Solidus Snake · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:08 pm Post subject:

Should have made a background on the crazy Spartan why he went mad. Anyways, good story, and hopefully the next part will answer my guestion.

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:16 pm Post subject:

All will be clear in time.

Solidus Snake · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:22 pm Post subject:

And in time I will wait.

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:47 pm Post subject:

Hehe, I actually find it funny that you thought David was crazy. I hadn't anticipated that. Though, in retrospect, I guess he is a bit off-the-chain.

Solidus Snake · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:04 pm Post subject:

Oh really, well I thought you meant to make him crazy and that made it interesting to me. Well it still rocks man.

Mainevent · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:08 pm Post subject:

I meant to make him somewhat mean and excessively violent against others, but not necessarily crazy.

Odin of SoS. · Member Joined: 27 Nov 2004 Posts: 85 Location: Iraq

i didnt think he was crazy. just thought he was doing his mission. still liked it. always like mains stuff.

Azrael · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 504 Location: Boston

Well done. You nearly lost me at the gymnastics feat near the beginning, but all in all I really enjoyed this. Here we go with a quasi-renegade Spartan story. Make him fight the Clowns. Very Happy

Zephyr · Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 1:24 am Post subject:

Good. But hard to understand. Which is why I'm dying for more. Please hurry up the next one!(But not enough that the quality is in any way diminished.)
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Mainevent · Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 2:05 am Post subject:

I can see why it's hard to understand- because in a way I tried to make it that way. Especially during the fall. I tried to get the confusion and such of falling.

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