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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 10: Bad Feeling About This…

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:22 pm    Post subject: A Unngoy Life: Chapter 10: Bad Feeling About This… Reply with quote

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21 July 2005, 12:35 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0721050035231.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Despite all of the uncoding and the nonsense, I'm hooked to this series...
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As am I. However you ared gonna need to indent before this series is considered mare than a joke in my mind
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

First of all, Mister, it would be best for you to crack open a few novels.

Observe them. Learn from them. You'll need the reading experience, and you'll note that novels don't have locator captions every sentence.

I will reserve further commentary until you respond.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have read the series so far but I still think their are to many races involved. And I agree that you don't need a locater caption before every paragraph. Any why was this story so short? I read it in one minute. Is it even 750 words or did you just hit peom?

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's 750. It doesn't seem like it, right? But it is. If he hit the poem button, he won't be writing anymore Fan Fiction, courtesy of Wu.
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