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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 10: Bad Feeling About This…
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
21 July 2005, 12:35 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0721050035231.html

Syotica · Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:32 pm Post subject:

Despite all of the uncoding and the nonsense, I'm hooked to this series...

Zephyr · Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:02 pm Post subject:

As am I. However you ared gonna need to indent before this series is considered mare than a joke in my mind
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SYSTEM · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:28 am Post subject:

First of all, Mister, it would be best for you to crack open a few novels.

Observe them. Learn from them. You'll need the reading experience, and you'll note that novels don't have locator captions every sentence.

I will reserve further commentary until you respond.

- Dave.
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Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:31 pm Post subject:

I have read the series so far but I still think their are to many races involved. And I agree that you don't need a locater caption before every paragraph. Any why was this story so short? I read it in one minute. Is it even 750 words or did you just hit peom?

Twisted Evil

Syotica · Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:56 pm Post subject:

It's 750. It doesn't seem like it, right? But it is. If he hit the poem button, he won't be writing anymore Fan Fiction, courtesy of Wu.