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Why the Covenant are Going to Win this War
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 6:11 pm    Post subject: Why the Covenant are Going to Win this War Reply with quote

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Why the Covenant are Going to Win this War
Posted by Kotno (sj_perez01@hotmail.com)
17 July 2005, 3:56 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Kotno0717051556201.html
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool, kinda depressing in a way but cool and true.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was both inspiring and depressing. Well done!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

All I've got to say is: Amen.

Good. I liked the ending the best. About strength, unity, that kind of thing. And you know, it DOES make me wonder: why are there wars now? It seems just so odd when you take something science fiction, and then compare and contrast it with today.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That...that was beautiful..and....it...it had CODE!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!! CODE IN A FIRST POST, CODE IN A FIRST POST!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 3:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Brilliant. No spelling mistakes, very inspirational.

"'And that, that is unity." Loved that line.

Well done.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Code in a first post. Why is it that no other newbs can do it. Not that your really a noob. You already proved that you demand respect. Excellent story. A departure from the Halo norm, which is something that I do with each of my stories. The only thing that could have been possibly wrong was that you wrote: The Covenant. I'm not sure if "the" should be capitalized. MC will no doubt provide the answer.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 10:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the encouragement guys. It's always nice to get feedback, good or bad, on any piece of written work. I look forward to reading and writting with you all more!
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 10:13 am    Post subject: nice Reply with quote

i like this guy but it would have been better if he got killed at the end for being an arse and depressing everyone
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I guess it's hard not to be depressing when the Covenant is about to fall upon Earth like a bunch of bricks.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good job. Sort of reminded me of the people who used to predict that Y2K would bring us back to the stone age--except your guy made more sense. I love characters that are willing to say truth, even when that truth is unthinkable. Did something inspire this (besides Halo, that is)?

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Man that was very deep. The philosophy was great.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You did good with the code and spelling, grammar etc. but I thought it was depressing. I mean the Humans have a chance to win if they form an 'uneasy alliance'. I hated it!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do they really? Only Bungie knows.
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