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Why the Covenant are Going to Win this War
Posted by Kotno (sj_perez01@hotmail.com)
17 July 2005, 3:56 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Kotno0717051556201.html

Elitehunter676 · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:47 pm Post subject:

Cool, kinda depressing in a way but cool and true.

thedarkfire · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:35 pm Post subject:

That was both inspiring and depressing. Well done!

SYSTEM · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:41 pm Post subject:

All I've got to say is: Amen.

Good. I liked the ending the best. About strength, unity, that kind of thing. And you know, it DOES make me wonder: why are there wars now? It seems just so odd when you take something science fiction, and then compare and contrast it with today.

- Dave.
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Zephyr · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 2:08 am Post subject:

That...that was beautiful..and....it...it had CODE!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!! CODE IN A FIRST POST, CODE IN A FIRST POST!!!!!!!
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Syotica · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 3:35 am Post subject:

Excellent.
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Dagorath · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:21 am Post subject:

Brilliant. No spelling mistakes, very inspirational.

"'And that, that is unity." Loved that line.

Well done.

Jester · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:35 am Post subject:

Code in a first post. Why is it that no other newbs can do it. Not that your really a noob. You already proved that you demand respect. Excellent story. A departure from the Halo norm, which is something that I do with each of my stories. The only thing that could have been possibly wrong was that you wrote: The Covenant. I'm not sure if "the" should be capitalized. MC will no doubt provide the answer.

Welcome to HBO-FF.

Kotno · Member Joined: 17 Jul 2005 Posts: 4

Thanks for the encouragement guys. It's always nice to get feedback, good or bad, on any piece of written work. I look forward to reading and writting with you all more!

The Dark Guardian · Member Joined: 19 Jul 2005 Posts: 1 Location: Syracuse, Ny

i like this guy but it would have been better if he got killed at the end for being an arse and depressing everyone

Dagorath · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:13 pm Post subject:

Well, I guess it's hard not to be depressing when the Covenant is about to fall upon Earth like a bunch of bricks.

Chuckles · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:15 pm Post subject:

Good job. Sort of reminded me of the people who used to predict that Y2K would bring us back to the stone age--except your guy made more sense. I love characters that are willing to say truth, even when that truth is unthinkable. Did something inspire this (besides Halo, that is)?

C.T. Clown

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

Man that was very deep. The philosophy was great.

ODST

Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:34 pm Post subject:

You did good with the code and spelling, grammar etc. but I thought it was depressing. I mean the Humans have a chance to win if they form an 'uneasy alliance'. I hated it!

Twisted Evil

Jester · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:41 pm Post subject:

Do they really? Only Bungie knows.