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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 7: The Battle of Jambo

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 2:44 pm    Post subject: A Unngoy Life: Chapter 7: The Battle of Jambo Reply with quote

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A Unngoy Life: Chapter 7: The Battle of Jambo
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
15 July 2005, 1:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0715050129281.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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There was a hissing noise, and suddenly Durge was minus his sword arm. Two seconds later, Nugga's Energy Sword sliced through Durge's middle.
"You okay, Demon?" Nugga asked, "I need your help with eliminating the Flood infestation that is occuring in the rear."
"Sure," the Master Chief said, "As long as we have some Brutes to back us up."
"It shall be done," the Prophet of Truth said as he floated up to them, "My Jiralhanae Honor Guard will accompany you."
"Let's go then," Master Chief said, "But we'll need


Uhhm, I haven't read this whole series, and sorry if I don't understand, but why is Truth helping the Master Chief and the Elites, when the Elites are in a civil war with the Prophets, and the Master Chief is well... Master Chief?

Other than that, you put in a fair amount of detail, and it is a very interesting story. Keep it up.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 10:11 pm    Post subject: Ready for the show Reply with quote

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Little did they know they were carrying a extra passenger. Durge was alive.

He sure is.


I enjoyed the DURGE battle up until the fellow he enveloped detonated his plasma gernades from within. While I can accept DURGE being liquidified, I had a problem with the fellow Nugga surviving the blast.

Based on the other Halo costumes I've spied at Dragon*Con and Comic Con, I think this script is ripe for a fan film.

Be well,
Thomas
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, bad idea for a movie script.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 3:11 pm    Post subject: pearls of wisdom Reply with quote

Thank you Mr. Scorsese.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 3:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Am I Mr. Scorsese?
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 3:56 am    Post subject: Thanks for the Comments Reply with quote

Thanks for commenting on the story. As for answering The Grenadier's questions:
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I haven't read this whole series, and sorry if I don't understand, but why is Truth helping the Master Chief and the Elites, when the Elites are in a civil war with the Prophets, and the Master Chief is well... Master Chief?


1:Truth is biding his time, waiting for a chance to attack that doesn't end in total disaster.
2:The MC has to work with Truth because if he doesn't, he will die.
3:The MC has Truth at gunpoint in his first appearance in the story, so Truth kind of has to work with him or he gets his head blown off.

These are the answers to your questions, so i'm outta here.
Peace Out!
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