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A Series of Poems: Sky Pilot
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
12 July 2005, 7:16 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ENS_Rabid_Ga0712051916371.html

SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:08 am Post subject:

Pretty damn good. Not cheesy like the others we've got on HBO. Excellent, excellent.

I love the idea of not being able to touch the sky. It's often been said that "The sky's the limit," and it's symbolic in the fact that sometimes the goal is not acheivable, even when you learn to fly.

Interesting on that fact, ENS.

- Dave.
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Master Chief Spartan- 117 · Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 5:11 am Post subject:

I'n not sure i understood it all but it is way better than my "We Are The Spartans" Twisted Evil

Guardian · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject:

Its been a long time since you've been here.

Welcome back man.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I agree. Pretty good. Not all too much in the way of improvement except some tuning and minor improvement via practice and further experience. Perhaps Chuckles would have more to say, as I am not a poet.

Let's see some more.
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Elitehunter676 · Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 6:49 pm Post subject:

Very nice.

Boy.I.Like.Halo · Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:29 am Post subject:

Good. A little more explosion or action. But very good. Damn i need to get a good sig Mad

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:23 am Post subject:

MasterSushi · Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:04 pm Post subject:

I have forwarded these comments onto Gall and he has asked me to post this for him in his abscence:

"I am touched that you trust me, really, it means a lot to me. Willed by your good words I am going to continue SPECTRE. Could the people who are in SPECTRE tell Sush if I still have their permission to use them. He will pass it on to me. Thank you again, so much Smile

"

So yeah, you heard the man!