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A Series of Poems: Sky Pilot

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 2:44 pm    Post subject: A Series of Poems: Sky Pilot Reply with quote

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A Series of Poems: Sky Pilot
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
12 July 2005, 7:16 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ENS_Rabid_Ga0712051916371.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty damn good. Not cheesy like the others we've got on HBO. Excellent, excellent.

I love the idea of not being able to touch the sky. It's often been said that "The sky's the limit," and it's symbolic in the fact that sometimes the goal is not acheivable, even when you learn to fly.

Interesting on that fact, ENS.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 5:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'n not sure i understood it all but it is way better than my "We Are The Spartans" Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 5:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its been a long time since you've been here.

Welcome back man.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree. Pretty good. Not all too much in the way of improvement except some tuning and minor improvement via practice and further experience. Perhaps Chuckles would have more to say, as I am not a poet.

Let's see some more.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 6:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good. A little more explosion or action. But very good. Damn i need to get a good sig Mad
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dave Luck wrote:
Pretty damn good. Not cheesy like the others we've got on HBO. Excellent, excellent.
Hey, this is ENS we're talking about, when has his stuff ever been cheesy? And I hope you weren't calling my poetry cheesy, Dave Smile .
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have forwarded these comments onto Gall and he has asked me to post this for him in his abscence:

"I am touched that you trust me, really, it means a lot to me. Willed by your good words I am going to continue SPECTRE. Could the people who are in SPECTRE tell Sush if I still have their permission to use them. He will pass it on to me. Thank you again, so much Smile "

So yeah, you heard the man!
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