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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:02 pm    Post subject: Classic Reply with quote

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Posted by Jillybean (jbean_gotmuse@yahoo.co.uk)
23 June 2005, 4:23 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0623051623561.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm... Was this the Pelican ride to the Weapons Cache that was the Flood containment center? Sounded like it, although the problem is, They didn't have Battle Rifles at that point.

But for the rest, pretty nice. Short and sweet, nice job.

Anyway, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Wink

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Happy B'day!

That was an... interesting story. That's all I'm gonna say.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty cool, Jilly. Pretty cool.

9/10

A little short
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JILLY!!! This was good, but short. I liked how they were crackin on eachother. This was really good, like all of your work.

My rating: 10/10. Like I said, short, but good.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Loved it...i can imagine that scene like that...ahha. imagine if they put that in the movie..lol doubt they would..but it would be hell funny.

nice job. If you do another one linking cut scenes, pm me and Ill look for it the next update..thats a promise.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Happy Birthday Jilly.

(looks at clock, looks at story, umm, runs out door... to be continued)
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I will lok for the next update also, Jilly.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Happy b'day, Jilly!


i know I didn' get it in my first post...sorry...don't hurt me
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty nice little story. 9/10 and no, that's not just because of your birthday!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Happy Birthday, Jillybean (i guess it's your birthday, I really don;t know, but...w/e....) Good, but I didn't get it very well. Funny.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. I think I'm going to try and do more shorts like this (maybe not this short, I only got away with it because Wu's a sap . . . errr, love you Wu!) I quite like the 'snapshot' idea.

I'm still working on that fic which goes with Pinkuh's pic, but I'm off on holiday on Monday so that might be a while longer
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 4:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that's actually a really good song, they played it at a baseball game once. infact i think i used to make my cat dance to it. that must have been when he stopped liking me.....

and yes just like everyone else i am going to wish you a happy birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! your lucky yours is in the summer, mine's like....in the beginning of school and my parents dont let me take the day off. it sucks.

anyhoo will you be starting a new series any time soon? not to press or anything but i miss them....
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 4:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's still three series to finish . . . but errrrrr *shifty eyes*
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You have three series more? Awsome...
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