HBO Fan Fiction

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Posted by Jillybean (jbean_gotmuse@yahoo.co.uk)
23 June 2005, 4:23 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0623051623561.html

JCDentonCZ · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:13 pm Post subject:

Hmm... Was this the Pelican ride to the Weapons Cache that was the Flood containment center? Sounded like it, although the problem is, They didn't have Battle Rifles at that point.

But for the rest, pretty nice. Short and sweet, nice job.

Anyway, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Wink

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Bronzemage · Member Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Posts: 100

Happy B'day!

That was an... interesting story. That's all I'm gonna say.

Shocked

Wiley K. · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:21 pm Post subject:

Pretty cool, Jilly. Pretty cool.

9/10

A little short

Ark Night · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:49 pm Post subject:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JILLY!!! This was good, but short. I liked how they were crackin on eachother. This was really good, like all of your work.

My rating: 10/10. Like I said, short, but good.

Mark Lieberg · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:51 pm Post subject:

Loved it...i can imagine that scene like that...ahha. imagine if they put that in the movie..lol doubt they would..but it would be hell funny.

nice job. If you do another one linking cut scenes, pm me and Ill look for it the next update..thats a promise.
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Wado · The Hammer Joined: 26 Jul 2004 Posts: 320

Happy Birthday Jilly.

(looks at clock, looks at story, umm, runs out door... to be continued)

Ark Night · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:35 pm Post subject:

I will lok for the next update also, Jilly.

Wiley K. · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:47 pm Post subject:

Happy b'day, Jilly!

i know I didn' get it in my first post...sorry...don't hurt me

Archangel_7 · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:20 pm Post subject:

Pretty nice little story. 9/10 and no, that's not just because of your birthday!
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Zephyr · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:31 pm Post subject:

Happy Birthday, Jillybean (i guess it's your birthday, I really don;t know, but...w/e....) Good, but I didn't get it very well. Funny.
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Jillybean · Darth Diva Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Posts: 299

Thanks guys. I think I'm going to try and do more shorts like this (maybe not this short, I only got away with it because Wu's a sap . . . errr, love you Wu!) I quite like the 'snapshot' idea.

I'm still working on that fic which goes with Pinkuh's pic, but I'm off on holiday on Monday so that might be a while longer

mooching sack of death · Member Joined: 20 Apr 2005 Posts: 25 Location: bleh

that's actually a really good song, they played it at a baseball game once. infact i think i used to make my cat dance to it. that must have been when he stopped liking me.....

and yes just like everyone else i am going to wish you a happy birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! your lucky yours is in the summer, mine's like....in the beginning of school and my parents dont let me take the day off. it sucks.

anyhoo will you be starting a new series any time soon? not to press or anything but i miss them....

Jillybean · Darth Diva Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Posts: 299

There's still three series to finish . . . but errrrrr *shifty eyes*

Ark Night · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 4:50 pm Post subject:

You have three series more? Awsome...