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Survival Instincts, Chapter 1

 
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 2:37 pm    Post subject: Survival Instincts, Chapter 1 Reply with quote

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Survival Instincts, Chapter 1
Posted by GLADIATRRR3000 (gladiatrrr2002@hotmail.com)
31 August 2004, 4:58 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=gladiatrrr30.0831040458492.html
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 10:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good storyline. I like it. Fair use of detail, Would have liked indentations though. Now, maybe all of those kids play paintball often, but you made killing those Covenant sound like childs play. Wasn't sure about that.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

good work, you seem to know what you're doing. I look forward to the next installments.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 03, 2004 3:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, it was good. But it seemed a little rushed towards the end. Try to work on that and it'll be awesome!
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