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To the Last Man Chapter 3
Posted by John Gurule, Jr. (d3jsgurule@yahoo.com)
7 June 2005, 4:47 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=john_gurule,.0607050447278.html

Archangel_7 · Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 11:05 pm Post subject:

This is actually my first time writing a briefing scene, and I don't think I did very well. But, that's for you to decide. Sad

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SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:36 am Post subject:

Ah, yez, verry goot. Verry goot indeet. You are becoming verry goot.

Oops, wrong accent. *AHEM*

Excuse me.

Hey, you don't need to start a whole new line:

"Cetra?" he whispered.

"Hmm?" replied the AI.

"There is a little more that I want to tell you."

Don't worry about it: don't space out too much remember: lookin' good, I'll finish reading and drop you another word when I can: I know you're eager for more commenting.

See you soon.

- Dave.
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Wiley K. · Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:41 pm Post subject:

Oh, damn. You already have a series with the title "To the last man"

Guess I'll have to look into a re-naming of a story I have in the works...