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Mission From SATU part 7: A Knife, a Clip and a Shotgun
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 12:43 pm    Post subject: Mission From SATU part 7: A Knife, a Clip and a Shotgun Reply with quote

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Mission From SATU part 7: A Knife, a Clip and a Shotgun
Posted by Chuckles
29 August 2004, 11:50 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0829041150537.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 2:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I went through this for hours before I posted it, but I STILL found a typo (in this case, an extra word). Life goes on.

By this time in the story a lot is going on, but I am still trying to keep it personal. I hope I succeeded.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn your writing is gettign better. But damn u killed me off. U suck

ODST

no i'm not joking, u killed me, u suck
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 5:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

man...this is gonna get ugly...i know, i just know C.T. is gonna screw with my head again.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome, just awesome. You have your own unique way of writing, and I respect you for that. The dialogue was impeccable.

Since Helljumper is in there, I believe it's fair for me to in there, too. Razz

Now there's a thought... Wink

Anyways, great.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2004 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great as always. But kill Ackerson, man, kil Ackerson...

(Let Dr. Halsey strangle him to death Very Happy !)
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2004 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Helljumper, don't blame me. It was YOU that didn't have the guts to shoot those kids. Wimp Very Happy

At least he went out with honor.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2004 5:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i don't see being shot in the back as honor. Damn could i have atleast fought, and if a superiour officer told me to kill the little fuckers, i would have.

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and i would a jackhammer to do it
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2004 9:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, you weren't shot in the back. You would shoot nine-year olds? Brutal.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 1:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay Helljumper, would you have liked this better:

Helljumper smirked as he looked through his scope. Twenty-seven helpless nine-year olds wandered bored. They won't be bored long.
"Okay boys, sight sight in. Whooooeeeee! That's what I call target-rich! A case of the General's best scotch to the one who scores the most headshots!"


Like that better? Question

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 1:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Helljumper, Chuckles puts u into his story and u don't even show gratitude? damn, you're hardcore.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 12:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey chuckles, except for the part where u made me sound like a Redneck. Couldn't I have been more professional. Anyway its probably better you killed me off, I would have hated to be killed by a SPARTAN.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 2:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know, I thought that you wouldn't want to be killed by a Spartan. He was a good character and I'm glad I had him in there.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 3:05 pm    Post subject: Rice-a-Roni, the San Fransico TreaT! Reply with quote

We should all do that, put other board members in the fan fic just to kill them off. But if any put me in and has me die some stupid way. I will send the soul-Suckers, Hahaha ! Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, soul suckers sounds like a lollipop

ODST

can i get one in cherry devil
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