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The Massacre Game: Round 3: Colussus
Posted by CrazyGrunt (pkackerman@comcast.com)
5 May 2005, 1:21 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=crazygrunt.0505050121364.html

SYSTEM · Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 4:16 pm Post subject:

Hey; didn't we comment on the last two? At least you could'ha followed the site directions and used the formatting tags, kid.

I'll say no more; I commented on the other two you submitted here.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

Mainevent · Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 6:11 pm Post subject:

Who needs to listen to comments when you could live in ignorant bliss!

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

You know, you have gotten some pretty in-depth comments on your last to. All sorts of good stuff that would have really helped you out. But, I haven't seen much improvement from that advice. Almost--as Main kindly pointed out--you are living in ignorance of our comments. Don't do that. Listen.

Guys, I think we may need to send an email.
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-MCC

SYSTEM · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 9:58 pm Post subject:

Naw, we'll just load his inbox with a bunch'a crude, offensive, malicious jokes; that should get his/her attention. Naw, I'm not that bad.

Well, someone who is tenacious enough to submit three no-work fics up here and isn't responding yet deserves a closer look; we should send an email, but you know, I'm not really intent on it; I haven't got the time, or the energy to argue with a load of insults in place of friendly critiquing.

So, we'll leave it at this; if he submits another, we'll deal with it then, but let's not cross bridges (or burn or build them) until we come to them.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

Mainevent · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 12:09 am Post subject:

What if we booby-trap the bridges, so that we can just blow them when the time comes...

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I believe that three is enough. If he hasn't responded on his own by now, I have no faith that he will later on. Sure, he can keep posting; but I won't see him as a real person until I see an actual reply.

So, I have just sent Mr. CrazyGrunt a friendly hello. Hopefully he'll decide to stop nd have a good look at the advice we have posted.
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-MCC

Mr. GotBeans · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 10:45 pm Post subject:

Naw, we'll just load his inbox with a bunch'a crude, offensive, malicious jokes-Dave Luck

Ya, thats what I'm going to do. This has no story, and there is no point in reading cause we know that Elite guy is going to win. Lord von H@m@ or something (The @'s were a start, right?) It has potential, but not much. SHOW DON'T TELL! Read some damn Clancey for Pete's sake! (Numero 2, I'M ON FIRE!) Listen to Dave, Russ, Mainevent, and especilly MCC. THEY WILL HELP YOU!

Mainevent · Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 12:05 am Post subject:

I'm reading the Splinter Cell book right now. Perterbed that it's not from Clancy himself, but it was free so what the hell.

Wiley K. · Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 1:00 am Post subject:

Is there any (legal) way we can ensure this guy never posts again?

Mainevent · Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 1:57 am Post subject:

We could always send "people" to his house to "break his keyboard"....