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High High High!
Posted by SeverianofUrth (severn117@hotmail.com)
21 April 2005, 4:22 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=severianofur.0421051622411.html

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 4:40 pm Post subject:

Very, very good. One of the best poems I've read on here. No complaints. Dang, that was nice!

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CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 6:17 pm Post subject:

Agreed. Great job, Urth formerly known as Severian.

Bleh.

thedarkfire · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 7:44 pm Post subject:

Youso good. *say it like Jar Jr Binks*

Michael Archer · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:45 pm Post subject: poem

Really good poem. No mistakes at ALL.

The Arbitress · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 2:09 am Post subject:

definately an interesting read, kind of hard to tell what its about until the end, and i like that. it adds mystery.

i have two questions, what is Sanzu, and where did the inspiration for this come from?

Chuckles · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:06 am Post subject:

Another good poem. No complaints.

C.T. Clown

Chuckles · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:11 am Post subject:

Well, this might be my first double post. I accidentally left a second comment on this thread. I just clicked on the wrong one. Now I'll go put the comment where it belongs Embarassed

C.T. Clown

Archangel_7 · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:57 pm Post subject:

Wow. That's a pretty good poem. No real complaints, except I hardly understood what the heck it was about Razz

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MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Nice. Symbolic and it was pretty dang fluent. You did good with this. Keep it up. Just don't stop with the stories.
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SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 11:46 pm Post subject:

Fire; a symbol of destruction, but also of advancement.

Dang, this was great. Man, I'm listening to Megadeth's "A Tout Le Monde," and it fits the mood well, especially the ending.

- Dave.
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SeverianofUrth · Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:39 pm Post subject:

Thanks, everyone. Feels good, really Very Happy

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Fire: I used it here as a symbol for purification.

Sanzu: Arbitress, don't you watch anime? Sanzu is basically the Japanese version of the river Styx.

Azrael · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 504 Location: Boston

Well done. Quite good. Though I must admit I wait in joyful hope for day four... Very Happy

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Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

Very cool. Keep it up!

dom1 · Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:23 am Post subject:

Ultimately beyond reproach. Cool