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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 4:20 pm    Post subject: High High High! Reply with quote

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High High High!
Posted by SeverianofUrth (severn117@hotmail.com)
21 April 2005, 4:22 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=severianofur.0421051622411.html
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 4:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very, very good. One of the best poems I've read on here. No complaints. Dang, that was nice!

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 6:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agreed. Great job, Urth formerly known as Severian.

Bleh.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 7:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Youso good. *say it like Jar Jr Binks*
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:45 pm    Post subject: poem Reply with quote

Really good poem. No mistakes at ALL.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 2:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

definately an interesting read, kind of hard to tell what its about until the end, and i like that. it adds mystery.

i have two questions, what is Sanzu, and where did the inspiration for this come from?
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Another good poem. No complaints.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, this might be my first double post. I accidentally left a second comment on this thread. I just clicked on the wrong one. Now I'll go put the comment where it belongs Embarassed

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. That's a pretty good poem. No real complaints, except I hardly understood what the heck it was about Razz .
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 5:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice. Symbolic and it was pretty dang fluent. You did good with this. Keep it up. Just don't stop with the stories.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 11:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fire; a symbol of destruction, but also of advancement.

Dang, this was great. Man, I'm listening to Megadeth's "A Tout Le Monde," and it fits the mood well, especially the ending.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, everyone. Feels good, really Very Happy .

Fire: I used it here as a symbol for purification.

Sanzu: Arbitress, don't you watch anime? Sanzu is basically the Japanese version of the river Styx.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 11:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well done. Quite good. Though I must admit I wait in joyful hope for day four... Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very cool. Keep it up!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ultimately beyond reproach. Cool
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