HBO Fan Fiction

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when Reason knocks...
Posted by Cottrelli (nick_cottrelli@hotmail.com)
20 April 2005, 8:13 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=cottrelli.0420052013441.html

Azrael · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 504 Location: Boston

Interesting. I enjoyed it.
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Michael Archer · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 11:02 pm Post subject: poem

Captial letters, "oncelistened", is NOT a compound word.

Besides that, it was pretty good.

thedarkfire · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 11:09 pm Post subject:

Only one punctuation and one capital letter...This could be a style thing like my poem but in this case, I think it detracts from the poem as a whole.

I did enjoy this too.

Cottrelli · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 1:27 am Post subject:

whoopsies on thecombined word, and yea, i think i may havgone a bit overboard w/ the whole not capitalizing thing

Chuckles · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:12 am Post subject:

Another good poem, Cotrelli. I liked it and have no complaints.

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MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I don't think it looked all that nice with no capitals. Looked kind of unprofessional. Didn't hurt how it was read, though.

Good theme in there. And pretty well written. Keep these up. Though, being a fan of stories, it would be good if you wrote one. And if you like poems, you could write some to match the story - chapters or just for whatever.

Overall, this was very nice. Keep up the work.
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Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

I liked it.