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Chuckles Member

Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Posts: 1000 Location: Grand Rapids MI
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:05 am Post subject: |
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I went over this a dozen times before I submitted it, but I still found a typo I missed. Oh well. Hope you guys like it.
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MasterGrunt_Yayap-117 Member
Joined: 13 Aug 2004 Posts: 14
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 1:19 pm Post subject: twists galore! |
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| Whoa! Another one bites the dust! Now, is this part of Lex's plans I wonder. Simjanes has this nasty habit of coming back from the dead... |
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Shaolin Fist Member
Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 27
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 7:45 pm Post subject: |
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::crickets chirping::
ok i'm gonna take a couple minutes and go back and read it again. i don't believe what i just read. |
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Helljumper Member
Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 11:43 pm Post subject: |
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Very impressive... this is coming together very well eventhough i am confused on certain parts. Maybe I just need to read it all of it together. Is the ODST Captain named Helljumper, me?
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Chuckles Member

Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Posts: 1000 Location: Grand Rapids MI
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 12:45 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, it's you. He first showed up in part 2, but hasn't been in since. I liked the character, so I've been waiting for a chance to bring him back in.
Glad you liked it.
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Conrad Lauf Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 10:00 am Post subject: |
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Okay, I'm feeling left out in that everyone knows who Colonel Ackerson is. Could you please explain, Chuckles? Oh, and how come everyone uses SPARTANs called Linda and Kelly?
But anyway, great story!
Keep it up
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Mastergrunt Member
Joined: 04 Aug 2004 Posts: 23 Location: On a frozen world with methane.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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NO, they got Sijamnes(sorry if I mispelled)! That darn chuckles. Hmmm, I wonder if lex is in on this conspiracy too? Oh, and who is that imposter, name-stealing, yayap guy. Mastergrunt is MY NAME. I don't care if you capitalized the g it's still my name. Wait a second, what am I getting all worked up about. It's not that big of a deal or is it???
JUST KIDDING But seriously was mastergrunt your own idea or did you copy mine? |
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Chuckles Member

Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Posts: 1000 Location: Grand Rapids MI
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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To answer your questions, Conrad:
Ackerson is a Colonel in the Office of Naval Intelligence (ONI). He doesn't like the SPARTAN program because, among other things, it takes funding away from his own SpecOps projects.
Kelly and Linda are Spartans that figure prominently in the novels. Kelly is a close friend of the Masterchief, and the fastest of the Spartans. Linda is the best sniper.
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Conrad Lauf Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:31 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for that Chuckles. That's helped me a lot.
Cheers  |
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Helljumper Member
Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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hey Conrad,
to get a better understanding of who Ackerson is, you should read or reread my series force Recon, i think i captured is personality pretty well. for any future questions bout ackerson, feel free to email me. Pittklipse@aol.com
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Conrad Lauf Member
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 7:08 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks Helljumper. Will do! |
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