HBO Fan Fiction

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Halo 2 - The REAL Ending Part 1
Posted by Conrad Lauf (conniesworld_aka_hell@hotmail.com)
19 April 2005, 7:50 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=conrad_lauf.0419050750171.html

Darth Spartan · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 3:16 pm Post subject: Hey!

That may have been the funnist crap I've ever read. Keep up the good work!

Azrael · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 504 Location: Boston

That was very funny. I don't have anything else to say, it was just really funny.

P.S: Where have YOU been?
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SeverianofUrth · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 6:01 pm Post subject:

Pretty funny, actually. In fact, I laughed quite alot while reading this. Great job- but remember to start using [indent] or skip a line between each paragraphs, as this will make the stories easier on the eye.

Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

Thanks for the comments so far guys, I'll remember to indent in my next story Severian.
Oh yeah, I've been doing a lot of Fan Art in the last six months or so lol, and actually completely forgot about Fan Fiction. But now I'm back doing both, so here I am.
And wow, there's a lot of new people here.
Cheers and thank you for your feedback!
Conrad

JCDentonCZ · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 9:39 pm Post subject:

Hmm. That was funny. You could also display why they never implemented the E3 Gameplay Trailer from 2003... But I liked this first part. Good job.

- JC
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Chuckles · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 10:06 pm Post subject:

Connie! Where have you been?

Great job--I loved it. You have a real talent for parody. That part about the Chief being the "physical" part of the ops was classic. I hope to see you around like we used to.

C.T. Clown

Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

Yep, I'm going to try and balance out the amount of time I spend my Fan Art and Fan Fiction more, so that I'm more active on the forums. Which reminds me, I need to submit some more art...
See you all later
Conrad

russ687 · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 11:06 pm Post subject:

Well, this made me smile.

Indents would help a lot. They're there for a reason. Also, watch your GPS, or most notably, your punctuation; several errors of that nature abounded.

Comedy, eh? Well you have a knack for it. Well done, as the humor wasn't stupid and 7th grade, but truely funny. You're ending trailed off and was weaker than I would have liked, but it was still decent.

Finally. Don't. Use. Author. Notes.

-Russ

Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

OK I'll remember that next time, thanks.

thedarkfire · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 1:45 am Post subject:

You make me chuckle Lauf.

A fine update indeed.

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:29 am Post subject:

Two comedies? In one update? Awesome!

You gotta good sense of humor, mate, keep it up. Maybe make the next one a little longer, though, eh?

Ark Night · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:47 am Post subject:

This was awsome, funny, and cool. Nice job, and nice to see you back

Mr.Pibb · Member Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 10 Location: Missouri

lol,that was pretty hilarious,want to see the next one Razz

Michael Archer · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 3:45 pm Post subject: story

That was pretty funny. Kind of weird though.