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Might of the Republic-Chapter One

 
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 3:09 am    Post subject: Might of the Republic-Chapter One Reply with quote

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Might of the Republic-Chapter One
Posted by Echo630
21 August 2004, 4:25 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=echo630.0821041625391.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hope u all like this one. i tiried hard for some original stuff, like the Default Rifle (Training Rifle)
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Feedback please....where is everyone
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

where is the Halo in this Halo fanfic. Its just too different I guess than what I expect

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 1:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

its getting harder to come up with new content in the year 2552 and being on Halo and staying on Earth and stuff....but dont worry, there will be an old enemy coming back (::stupidly:: i wonder who that could be?::stupidly:Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 3:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

if u liked this story, then u should know that i have already created its sequal to appear on wednsday of thursday
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't really agree with how you maind the so called "Training Rifle". I really don't think that an effective training weapon would be transition-able, nor would it really be practical. Part of using weapons in training is to use real weapons. The concept of using a weapon like an "intar", like from SG-1, is a good one, but you shouldn't have made it a "transformer".
Like Helljumper, I am unsure yet of where Halo comes in here, but I'll be waiting.
You need more detail, like describing how stuff interacts with people, and other stuff. Keep on working.
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