HBO Fan Fiction

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Might of the Republic-Chapter One
Posted by Echo630
21 August 2004, 4:25 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=echo630.0821041625391.html

Echo630 · Member Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 8

hope u all like this one. i tiried hard for some original stuff, like the Default Rifle (Training Rifle)

Echo630 · Member Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 8

Feedback please....where is everyone

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

where is the Halo in this Halo fanfic. Its just too different I guess than what I expect

ODST

Echo630 · Member Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 8

its getting harder to come up with new content in the year 2552 and being on Halo and staying on Earth and stuff....but dont worry, there will be an old enemy coming back (::stupidly:: i wonder who that could be?::stupidly: Smile

Echo630 · Member Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 8

if u liked this story, then u should know that i have already created its sequal to appear on wednsday of thursday

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I don't really agree with how you maind the so called "Training Rifle". I really don't think that an effective training weapon would be transition-able, nor would it really be practical. Part of using weapons in training is to use real weapons. The concept of using a weapon like an "intar", like from SG-1, is a good one, but you shouldn't have made it a "transformer".
Like Helljumper, I am unsure yet of where Halo comes in here, but I'll be waiting.
You need more detail, like describing how stuff interacts with people, and other stuff. Keep on working.
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