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The Devil's Maw: Part 3

 
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:31 pm    Post subject: The Devil's Maw: Part 3 Reply with quote

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The Devil's Maw: Part 3
Posted by Conrad Lauf (conniesworld_aka_hell@hotmail.com)
16 August 2004, 9:45 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=conrad_lauf.0816040945463.html
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok people. I've decided to start posting art on the Fan Art pages to go with my stories. That way, people will get a good idea on what I'm talking about e.g. Manreapers, Flood Dominion Forms etc. These pics will start appearing on the Fan Art pages as soon as I can get my hands on a scanner...

And if you're wondering if my art is any good, well I think I can say that it is about fifty times better than my pityful attempt at Fan Fic.

Cheers y'all Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting, as usual.

Sometimes I have a hard time picturing what is going on: as if you saw it clearly yourself, but didn't write enough details for the reader to get it. I like your fanfics because they are different. You write by different rules and have your own style. Keep writing. I don't think your stuff is pathetic at all.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've really liked this series. You do action extraordinarily well. I'm eager to see the pictures of these Manreapers: nothing like black cloaks and blades to make your creations badass. Keep it up, this is good stuff.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 12:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

grammar was off. I just couldn't picture it eventhough i read most of it. Its the way you write and the lack of detail, order, and view points

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 9:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh right. I probably should have mentioned this earlier. If your wondering what the inside of the ship looks like, its pretty much exactly the same as the Truth and Reconciliation. But yeah, I'll try hard to put more detail and adjectives in the next chapter.

Cheers and thanks for the comments Very Happy
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