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Mission From SATU part 5: Eyes of Death
Posted by Chuckles
15 August 2004, 8:24 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0815040824455.html

hunter_that_dances · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 30

Ah..., very good. Nice twist with the Fred's parents thing.

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

that was very good. you should put in some Spartan vs Spartan hand to hand. I can see the blurs now

ODST

Shaolin Fist · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 27

oh hell no C.T. u did not just pull another one and killed Fred. i should've known. u sadistic SOB!

with that said, kick ass job. Laughing

Mastergrunt · Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:59 am Post subject:

Sniff, sniff. That was sad. Poor Fred. Okay I'll stop with the emotional stuff, man was that good. Wink

White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

yay fred is dead i never like ......but great story

Chuckles · Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:29 pm Post subject:

Nobody is safe from death in this story, not even MC. If I wasn't willing to kill Fred, why would anyone believe that MC might die? And the possibility of 117 dying is the crux of my plot.

Thanks for the comments, and thanks for reading.

C.T. Clown

Brigade_of_marines · Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 10:52 pm Post subject:

If asked for a good name of a planet, what would you say would be a good name?

Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

I thought this story was good. Nice job Chuckles! Smile

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:03 pm Post subject:

Wow, that was pretty cool. I'm just getting into this series now, but everything is well written. Great job!

Now, do you think you can try and read the latest chapter of TStS for me? I haven't written anything for a while and I need to see if my skills are still up to par. Wink

SeverianofUrth · Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:48 pm Post subject:

Always a pleasure to read. And I hope Master Chief dies a heroic death... but you better kill him, anyways.

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 7:37 am Post subject:

I can see already that my ending isn't going to please everyone. Most cry for Ackerson's death, some for MC's and some sick and twisted peace-loving weirdo out there is probably hoping that everyone is able to patch things up at the end without bloodshed. Twisted Evil

Not likely Twisted Evil

As long as the ending packs a punch, I'll be happy.

C.T. Clown