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Mission From SATU part 5: Eyes of Death

 
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:31 pm    Post subject: Mission From SATU part 5: Eyes of Death Reply with quote

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Mission From SATU part 5: Eyes of Death
Posted by Chuckles
15 August 2004, 8:24 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0815040824455.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah..., very good. Nice twist with the Fred's parents thing.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that was very good. you should put in some Spartan vs Spartan hand to hand. I can see the blurs now

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 8:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh hell no C.T. u did not just pull another one and killed Fred. i should've known. u sadistic SOB!



with that said, kick ass job. Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sniff, sniff. That was sad. Poor Fred. Okay I'll stop with the emotional stuff, man was that good. Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 4:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yay fred is dead i never like ......but great story
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nobody is safe from death in this story, not even MC. If I wasn't willing to kill Fred, why would anyone believe that MC might die? And the possibility of 117 dying is the crux of my plot.

Thanks for the comments, and thanks for reading.

C.T. Clown
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 10:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If asked for a good name of a planet, what would you say would be a good name?
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 10:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought this story was good. Nice job Chuckles! Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, that was pretty cool. I'm just getting into this series now, but everything is well written. Great job!

Now, do you think you can try and read the latest chapter of TStS for me? I haven't written anything for a while and I need to see if my skills are still up to par. Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Always a pleasure to read. And I hope Master Chief dies a heroic death... but you better kill him, anyways.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 7:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can see already that my ending isn't going to please everyone. Most cry for Ackerson's death, some for MC's and some sick and twisted peace-loving weirdo out there is probably hoping that everyone is able to patch things up at the end without bloodshed. Twisted Evil Not likely Twisted Evil

As long as the ending packs a punch, I'll be happy.

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