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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:57 pm    Post subject: A Lost Doctor Reply with quote

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A Lost Doctor
Posted by Random 14-Year-Old (i-rule-2008@sbcglobal.net)
28 February 2005, 2:03 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=random_14-ye.0228050203221.html
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Short, but well done. Too short.

But well done.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. Eh, I was bored so I figured, why not throw together a Halo poem? Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting. I agree that it was far too short. It could have been a lot bigger and longer. Expanded and filled with symbolism. A good idea for a poem, but next time try to develop it a bit more.


Overall, it was a poem. A fairly decent one. But keep working to improve. Good luck.
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