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hboff Site Admin
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Harbringer352 Member

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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:25 am Post subject: |
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What I love about this is that you maintained the fact that John is a living legend, but also human, and without deviating from his stoic personality. Fantastic style as always. |
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eb4642 IRC Channel Operator

Joined: 09 May 2009 Posts: 77 Location: The Dark Tower of NW10
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:49 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, Harb.
...Tharb! _________________ The Elitist Bastard | Writing is the business of professional turd-polishing.
"(don't take this review too seriously) If you doubt this is possible, how is it there are PYGMIES + DWARFS??" |
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CaptainRaspberry Member

Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 56 Location: Littleton, MA
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2013 11:21 pm Post subject: |
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Dammit, EB. Why you gotta be so good? It's been too long since you've published anything here and I'd forgotten what we were missing.
Sorry it took so long for me to review this. Life, y'know? _________________ Superstite es non sole;
Salute es dignus.
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eb4642 IRC Channel Operator

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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 4:07 am Post subject: |
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Better, much better, late than never. Always.
And thank you, Captain. That means a lot coming from the person who wrote The Knife's Edge. _________________ The Elitist Bastard | Writing is the business of professional turd-polishing.
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flugelmeister Member

Joined: 17 Feb 2009 Posts: 11 Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 10:40 am Post subject: |
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A thoroughly entertaining read. _________________ Tis not fear that grips him. Only a heightened sense of things. |
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Syotica Moderator

Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Posts: 578 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:50 pm Post subject: |
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Well done! |
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eb4642 IRC Channel Operator

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Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:16 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, guys. _________________ The Elitist Bastard | Writing is the business of professional turd-polishing.
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QueenMastaFatz Member
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Posted: Sat Jun 29, 2013 8:19 pm Post subject: |
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I don't usually get into fan fiction, but this story really sucked me in. I thought you did a great job showing what Chief is like when he is not out on assignment in his armor. Thanks for sharing! |
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eb4642 IRC Channel Operator

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Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:10 pm Post subject: |
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QueenMastaFatz wrote: | I don't usually get into fan fiction, but this story really sucked me in. I thought you did a great job showing what Chief is like when he is not out on assignment in his armor. Thanks for sharing! |
You're welcome, thanks for your comment! _________________ The Elitist Bastard | Writing is the business of professional turd-polishing.
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