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Fic Pick of the Week - April 9th

 
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(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 5:31 am    Post subject: Fic Pick of the Week - April 9th Reply with quote

Well, JD requested that Revellie not be put forward for the Fic Pick, so that only leaves...


AZRAEL'S THE DAY BEFORE TOMORROW...Part 6.

A realistic but emotional feel to the new addition makes for a eye-catching read, one that seems to draw from the setting's location enough to not only make allusions, but to make real. A trait and skill many a writer these days lack. Az does it in spades.

What gets me in this entire series is the characters. They're great. I mean, when I think of them, I don't think of blocks of text, I think of real people. They display emotion that is really realistic and provides depth.

However, sometimes it gets confusing when a lot of characters are speaking, but a little clarification and it would be one hundred percent, absolutely perfect.

Good job, Az.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As the only person in this room, I proudly accept the award that could go to no one other than me!

(had anyone else written that, I would have slammed them. It's not about winning the fic pick. It's about submitting the best story you can and learning.)

Regardless, thanks Gall. And everyone else, get to commenting on the new stories! Go go go!
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Day Before Tomorrow Part 6 is seriously deserving of more reviews. Belated 'grats, Az. I'm looking forward to the next entry in the series.


~J. D.
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