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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 12:17 pm    Post subject: Code n 0 0 b: Chapter 5 - n00bfiltration Reply with quote

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Code n 0 0 b: Chapter 5 - n00bfiltration
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27 July 2007, 1:44 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Skul0727070144361.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was hilarious. I loled. Laughing

My only complaint is that it was a bit short.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Man, I know some people like the anti-readers. Nice chapter, even though it was a bit on the short side. Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome job, Skul! The screenplay bit at the beginning was my favorite part. I also liked the how the anti-reader fanboy section. Keep it up! 9/10
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 10:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice try at the formatting, but that isn't how you format a script, it's quite different. Try scriptbuddy. Myself, I've got a guide here, but it's in pen-and-paper and I've been too busy to copy it down.

I liked the lolwtf's dialogue, though, that part was funny and well thought out, and the part about the fanbois just 'joining in' also made me laugh, because I remembered that saying: "He who laughs last...



...just doesn't get it."

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wasn't going for a really accurate-looking script. Just something simple enough that looks roughly like a screenplay. Thanks for suggesting scriptbuddy, but I don't write that kind of stuff regularly. I very much doubt I'll be doing it again.

As for it being short... well, it's actually around the same length as the other chapters. It's the probably the screenplay at the start that's making it seem short.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heh, thats awesome. I found that to be one of the funniest things I've read...until I realized that some people are actually like that.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Skul wrote:
liek lol they r gonna dei! seded spansh spartatatan "we r tek ovur the forumz nd the will sai uz stoires r gr8 an well laff atum"!!! "good plane " sed an nerby n00b wot wiz nerby "lol i know" laffded spansih spataran wif a hapy lok on him arngry fase!


I actually understood every bit of that.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, awesome job again Skul. Definitely the best fan fiction series right now (in my opinion) Smile

I have one question though. Are you portraying that the HBOFF building has fan boys or just lurkers running around in the building that aren't regulars, just sitting around and reading and such? It seems so but I'm just curious.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, the fanboys, anti-readers and n00bs have infiltrated the HBOFF building. You... have been following the earlier chapters, right? Remember they snuck in back in an earlier chapter (written ten million years ago)?

Are you sure this is the best? What about Inferno, my main project? Or The HBO Experience? Or Bonehaded Biography -- A Skulection of My Life, my autobiography? Wait, that last one's not out, yet... whatever...
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Skul wrote:
No, the fanboys, anti-readers and n00bs have infiltrated the HBOFF building. You... have been following the earlier chapters, right? Remember they snuck in back in an earlier chapter (written ten million years ago)?


Yeah..but I'm still wondering like, about the set up of the HBOFF building. Apart from the regulars who else occupies it normally? For some reason I thought fanboys who enjoyed hanging around the HBOFF people would hang around in the building normally.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fanboys hanging around with us? We don't allow 'em. Anyway, they're following the n00bs because they have no idea what's going on. They're just wanting to belong, "Some guy tells us to do this, we do it."

The only people occupying the building are the Regulars and Moderators. Wu occasionally comes in, usually just to update the Story Archive, but he's not based at HBOFF.

Man, I gotta write this information down and post it somewhere so you can have a look to see what's what, who's who and stuff like that.

Basically, though it's like this:

Regulars, Moderators, Administrators = Good guys.

n00bs, fanboys, anti-readers = Bad guys, enemies, kill, kill, kill!

M'kay?
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 1:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So, is the HBOFF building like a subsection of the HBO building? Confused
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 3:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Skul wrote:
Wu occasionally comes in, usually just to update the Story Archive, but he's not based at HBOFF.


For some reason this gives me the image of Wu as a high-class executive flying in on a helicopter every Friday. Anyone else? No?

Anyway, nice job, I have some catching up to do but it's hilarious so far.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Skul wrote:
Fanboys hanging around with us? We don't allow 'em. Anyway, they're following the n00bs because they have no idea what's going on. They're just wanting to belong, "Some guy tells us to do this, we do it."

The only people occupying the building are the Regulars and Moderators. Wu occasionally comes in, usually just to update the Story Archive, but he's not based at HBOFF.

Man, I gotta write this information down and post it somewhere so you can have a look to see what's what, who's who and stuff like that.

Basically, though it's like this:

Regulars, Moderators, Administrators = Good guys.

n00bs, fanboys, anti-readers = Bad guys, enemies, kill, kill, kill!

M'kay?


Got it, yo.
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