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  Topic: Chapter 7: Massacre on High Charity
noobylam

Replies: 2
Views: 1030

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:20 am   Subject: Chapter 7: Massacre on High Charity
no indenting?
  Topic: Shadows of an Empire: Chapter 1
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 1063

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:57 pm   Subject: Shadows of an Empire: Chapter 1
Yo, you are submitting too many chapters at a time. Only submit one chapter/week, give viewers a chance to finish reading before writing more. It's too much for our minds! Mad
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  Topic: Tin Cans: They Stand Alone
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 1194

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:42 pm   Subject: Tin Cans: They Stand Alone
There were a few minor errors in your chapter; just fix your grammar and format. Overall, it was a good one.

Aren't you the one who added me on MSN messenger? Wait it is you... Confused
  Topic: Dead In Space
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 882

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:36 pm   Subject: Error
This is the final chapter of the old series, "Stories of The Legendary Helljumper."

Srry for those who've been waiting for it since June the 28th. There were major set-backs; I had bette ...
  Topic: Chapter I: A Familiar Evil
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 1055

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:30 pm   Subject: Error
Opps...A major error. Sorry, i forgot to type in the series title. That's weird, I remember typing it....
  Topic: Halo: Spartan of Reach
noobylam

Replies: 2
Views: 928

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 2:25 am   Subject: Halo: Spartan of Reach
Please indent while writing your story...I got lost a few times Confused
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  Topic: Stories of The Legendary Hell Jumper: Dead In Space
noobylam

Replies: 6
Views: 1913

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 3:26 am   Subject: Stories of The Legendary Hell Jumper: Dead In Space
Hey I don't plagarise... Confused as I told you before, the only place where there is another copy...is my webpage. Razz

Well I stopped writing about the first halo and I'm working on helljumper series ba ...
  Topic: Longsword R: Norah
noobylam

Replies: 19
Views: 4932

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 4:26 pm   Subject: Longsword R: Norah
Very well put together! Very Happy Your grammar, use of the code, and formatting was excellent!
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  Topic: Spartans Forever: Part II
noobylam

Replies: 18
Views: 3135

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 4:09 pm   Subject: Spartans Forever: Part II
Yo, c'mon man. You made the same mistake on your first chapter! Confused Please learn how to use the Code and formatting. I got lost in the third paragraph because my annoying cousin started beating me wit ...
  Topic: Education: Chapter III of IV
noobylam

Replies: 7
Views: 2343

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 4:04 pm   Subject: Education: Chapter III of IV
Ahhh!!! The one I've been waiting for...the third chapter! Very Happy Man, my brain malfunctioned after trying to solve the math questions. I didn't learn it yet... Confused

There were a few grammar mistakes an ...
  Topic: The Ring of Fate
noobylam

Replies: 5
Views: 1468

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 3:57 pm   Subject: The Ring of Fate
An extremely good poem I've seen in a while...Very well put together!
I like how you tied war, life, and death together. It made perfect sense! Very Happy
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  Topic: The Meaning of Fear
noobylam

Replies: 10
Views: 3060

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:58 pm   Subject: The Meaning of Fear
That I know, but they don't really ever talk. They just sort of roar. I don't think I have ever heard anything that could be translated into words come from their mouths.
Thats why I put that in thei ...
  Topic: Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 2
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 1364

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:50 pm   Subject: Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 2
I see that you got a !@#! load of feedback in the last chapter. But I still gotta blame you for using the CODE poorly. Your formatting need some improvments as well. Though you've made some errors, th ...
  Topic: Those Who Fought: Chapter 2
noobylam

Replies: 1
Views: 1125

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 4:53 pm   Subject: Those Who Fought: Chapter 2
Please leave spaces between paragraphs in your submission. It is extremely difficult to read your format. You indented properly, but forgot to divide the paragraphs. It'll be good to read next time if ...
  Topic: The Lonely Sentinel
noobylam

Replies: 17
Views: 5417

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:04 pm   Subject: The Lonely Sentinel
Sentinels actually have a mind of their own? Nice topic, hmm the point of view of a sentinel...LOL
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