HBO Fan Fiction

The story has a campy humor to it. I liked it for that. Entertaining read.

Grammar was good, I think there was a missing "the" in one of the first sentences, but it is good to see no rea ...

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It used to be that if you didn't like a story you didn't bother to leave a comment. What about writing what you liked about the story before saying anything negative?

I dont mean to say any thing

But the entire fan fiction
that i posted there wasn't written by me!

This is just a copy paste of a serious
on a different forum i am on
But i did write PROFILE M ...

Well crud, my formatting didn't come out right. It was good on my computer...

Looks like there are some line breaks in there. Maybe preview will help you see where there are extra line breaks when ...

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Apparently story titles that have angle brackets "<>" don't show up correctly in the forum subject but the problem is somewhere else (the forum supports angle brackets in the subject). They seem ...

look dude, i've been writing this fanfic for 8 months, starting december 12th 2004. That's right, its been a year since i started the fanfic. And i have finished it, although i'm trying to get it publ ...

Wow - nice. Definitely worth the long read. The artwork was wonderful. How long does it take to put something like this together? Looks like some work went into this.

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Louis says he has fixed the problem with "&" characters in the title, so your stories should be alright from now on.

Sorry if this did'nt meet up to certain standards- this was written before the critical comments were made, but came onto the side afterward. Also: I don't title it "Starwars," I title it "Starwars an ...

CSP499, your story flowed well but it is hard to read because of the formatting you have chosen to use. Generally you want to start a new paragraph whenever a new speaker comes into play.

I can see ...

It's good to see fellow martial artists on the forum. However, keep anything that can be viewed as a personal attack off of this forum... meaning that unless you know the person personally, be careful ...