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  Topic: A Very Johnson Christmas: A Halo Christmas Story
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 9
Views: 3453

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:51 pm   Subject: A Very Johnson Christmas: A Halo Christmas Story
My thoughts:

Awwwwww.

Wink
  Topic: Null and Void
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 13
Views: 5254

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:37 am   Subject: Null and Void
Really good stuff, J.D.. You oughta post more digestible-sized pieces like this more often Wink.

I think my favorite thing about this is that it just feels...real. You're obviously keeping things int ...
  Topic: Fan Fic Pizzle of the Wizzle (October 16)
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 1
Views: 3164

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:45 am   Subject: Fan Fic Pizzle of the Wizzle (October 16)
A light load this week but an interesting one: promising stuff from some newer guys!

First up, by acd137
Obviously, this doesn't have much business being posted as fanfic; it's essentially a summ ...
  Topic: Halo: True Sangheili (Part Three + Four)
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 2
Views: 1624

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 2:30 pm   Subject: Halo: True Sangheili (Part Three + Four)
Overall, I think you've got a very interesting concept here, Wolver. I'll get the nasty bits of my feedback out of the way and then I'll come back to what I like Smile.

First of all, you do have a pre ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 18
Views: 14213

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:57 pm   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
For the record, that comment above was to commend Shroud for doing a pick as a new guy. No personal stake here, but I also don't condone the use of the WM award this week (or most weeks, really). That ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 18
Views: 14213

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:09 pm   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
Well done, Shroud!
  Topic: BUMPER SPECIAL Fic Pick of the Week (w/e 2 October)
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 16
Views: 12821

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 6:26 pm   Subject: BUMPER SPECIAL Fic Pick of the Week (w/e 2 October)
Well-done conquering the beast, eb Razz

I'll have to get to some of these.
  Topic: We March!
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 2
Views: 1812

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:45 pm   Subject: We March!
I've always had a bit of a hard time with rhymed poems without meter. Do both or go free! Razz.

But that's just my personal preference. In any case, it's nice to see a poem, feels like it's been a lo ...
  Topic: Babylon High (The Worst Possible Social Experiment Ever) Pro
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 4
Views: 1901

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:59 pm   Subject: Babylon High (The Worst Possible Social Experiment Ever) Pro
I enjoyed reading this quite a lot. Like kabu said, you have a fun, easy-to-read style. A story about something as silly as an inter-species high school set in a world based on something as interestin ...
  Topic: Not what you think it is
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 8
Views: 3873

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:43 am   Subject: Not what you think it is
I'm with the rest of the pack here: good work. I really enjoy this all dialogue stuff. I agree with kabu, though, the second conversation didn't match up to the first. But that's not at all to say it ...
  Topic: Fan Fick Pick of the Week - 7/17/09
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 1
Views: 3341

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:38 am   Subject: Fan Fick Pick of the Week - 7/17/09
While our load of submissions this week is admittedly rather meh, it's still always great to see new faces coming in. So to CorruptedHalo, Rtas Vadumee, and ween14, welcome! (And welcome back, Aaron.) ...
  Topic: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 170
Views: 68856

PostForum: HBOFF Contest Forum   Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:08 am   Subject: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
I know the word-cap has been set to 7000, and I hate to constantly "1up" it; but if we were to find our story complete at, say, 7500 words, would this be an acceptable contribution? As it st ...
  Topic: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 170
Views: 68856

PostForum: HBOFF Contest Forum   Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 4:04 am   Subject: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
I don't think there's any harm done in getting someone to help you proofread. If someone is playing with or correcting your story so much that it's almost as if it's not your original work anymore, th ...
  Topic: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 170
Views: 68856

PostForum: HBOFF Contest Forum   Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:42 am   Subject: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
Normally I'd be all in favor of adding artwork to a piece (it expands the creative element), but this being a contest, I just wouldn't wanna see anyone cry foul if you were to be a winner, saying that ...
  Topic: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
The 14th Wonder

Replies: 170
Views: 68856

PostForum: HBOFF Contest Forum   Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:18 am   Subject: Contest Rules, Guidelines and Questions
Well since the emphasis here is on writing, I would vote nay on including artwork simply to enhance the story. (And not everyone has access to that either, which is a bit unfair)

I think I'd be fin ...
 
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