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  Topic: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (02/22-02/29) bee-hotches!
Mad Max

Replies: 3
Views: 1544

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:34 pm   Subject: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (02/22-02/29) bee-hotches!
Yea, J.D.'s piece is amazingly good. And its good to see you back Azrael.
  Topic: Horror: Reality
Mad Max

Replies: 8
Views: 2709

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:00 pm   Subject: Horror: Reality
You answered my question on the confusion on whether it was a Flood form or something else? god, im retarded not to have catch that
  Topic: Prologue to Operation
Mad Max

Replies: 10
Views: 2297

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 8:52 pm   Subject: Prologue to Operation
This was waaaay too short and you really should've indented your paragraphs. Your details were great, no noticeable errors I could spot, but the only thing that irked me was the lack of coding for the ...
  Topic: Horror: Reality
Mad Max

Replies: 8
Views: 2709

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 8:50 pm   Subject: Horror: Reality
Wow dude, I have to say that this was intense. You built up the action nicely from start to finish and you ended it with a cliffhanger. Most impressive. I kinda figured that you screwed up on the titl ...
  Topic: You Know My Name: Intermission: Adbridged Lies
Mad Max

Replies: 3
Views: 1860

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:46 pm   Subject: You Know My Name: Intermission: Adbridged Lies
I can't wait for the final part. This really pulled me in, and honestly, just like Spartan 006 pointed out, that was the only mistake i noticed. I also really like the title for some reason. It just a ...
  Topic: Halo 2: Uprising - Chapter 6
Mad Max

Replies: 2
Views: 1103

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:09 am   Subject: Halo 2: Uprising - Chapter 6
Thank you, kr-1426. I was kind of in a tight spot with this chapter because it was the day before submission and I actually had planned on more details about the marine from the start of the cutscene, ...
  Topic: Minutemen: Cronin Protocol Chap. 16
Mad Max

Replies: 5
Views: 2221

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 3:42 am   Subject: Minutemen: Cronin Protocol Chap. 16
Ah, thank you for clarifying that. I figured you did it solely for diversity but it seemed like such an odd name, like you made it up all most, but now knowing its Indian in nature, it makes perfect s ...
  Topic: Minutemen: Cronin Protocol Chap. 16
Mad Max

Replies: 5
Views: 2221

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 5:53 pm   Subject: Minutemen: Cronin Protocol Chap. 16
Wow...all I can say is that this was fantastic. And I'm gonna say this, but I believe O'Shea is a fascinating character, and you do a good job describing him. One thing struck me out of curiosity thou ...
  Topic: You Know My Name: 2 of 3: The Ark
Mad Max

Replies: 5
Views: 2241

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 5:42 pm   Subject: You Know My Name: 2 of 3: The Ark
Damn, this one is longer than some of my chapters, but I agree with you on that some parts DO seemed rush, but then again, to me, that's a small thing compared to the good things. I think it was good ...
  Topic: The legend of Halo (compressed)
Mad Max

Replies: 1
Views: 1043

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 5:40 pm   Subject: The legend of Halo (compressed)
No offense, but this isn't really fanfiction. It's just a retelling of the entire Halo series with some bad grammar and puncutation mistakes. If I'm being harsh, sorry, but retelling the entire Halo s ...
  Topic: 058
Mad Max

Replies: 7
Views: 2941

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:51 pm   Subject: 058
I liked the conflict that was presented with the boy and his URF father, but to me for some reason, the idea seemed cliche at the same time. But the method in which you presented the conflict negated ...
  Topic: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (01/11 - 01/18)
Mad Max

Replies: 15
Views: 4536

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:06 am   Subject: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (01/11 - 01/18)
I enjoyed Trooper's fic myself, and that river-crossing scene is pretty sweet. I'm not as nit-picky as Az may be, but I do know something good when i see it.

And fyi, I had a inexplicable computer ...
  Topic: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (01/04-01/11)
Mad Max

Replies: 4
Views: 1722

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:25 am   Subject: Azrael's Fic Pick of the Week (01/04-01/11)
Thanks for the honorable 3rd place mention Az! It really means alot, and I'm glad that you found it to be a significant improvement over the first two chapters. However, for chapter 5, i plan on inclu ...
  Topic: Part VII: Extinguished Flame
Mad Max

Replies: 3
Views: 1858

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:11 am   Subject: Part VII: Extinguished Flame
I read up on your other six parts, and reading this, I felt it concluded your series very well. I liked Gnarlg's character myself. Nice job and if you got time, I'd like to see you create another stor ...
  Topic: Wake Me Chap 2
Mad Max

Replies: 1
Views: 1047

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:37 pm   Subject: Wake Me Chap 2
Same problem as your other one: dont jumble yer dialog one right after the other. Start a new paragraph whenever you begin dialog.
 
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