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  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - Peace, Remembrance & a Heavy
Jillybean

Replies: 5
Views: 3046

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:05 am   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Peace, Remembrance & a Heavy
Making the Arbiter a sympathetic character (and by extension the Covenant) was what I'd always set out to do, so I'm very pleased to see that pay off. It's a pet peeve of mine in war fiction that it's ...
  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - The Covenant
Jillybean

Replies: 4
Views: 3479

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:44 pm   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - The Covenant
Yep, Kr's right, the human terms are 'slang', like we would call a marine a 'jarhead'.

And as this is a story about integration, I'm glad you picked up on the shotgun being favoured by N'tho.

A ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week, October 10 -- MAKE PHAEDRUS BROKE!
Jillybean

Replies: 34
Views: 9073

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:44 pm   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week, October 10 -- MAKE PHAEDRUS BROKE!
Ouch, tough crowd.

Very commendable, donating like this. Wish you all the best with it Smile
  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket
Jillybean

Replies: 3
Views: 2655

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:27 am   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket
I hate in-game combat in fic so it's not my favourite thing to write. I'm trying though - especially since the next chapter is 'The Covenant' - I don't think there can be a more important chapter in t ...
  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - Serendipity
Jillybean

Replies: 7
Views: 4546

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:23 am   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Serendipity
There is, sadly, a good few chapters of backstory which shows that Saia is extremely instrumental in the schism, but it's all background and underground work (being in the public eye, with children an ...
  Topic: Aetiee #1
Jillybean

Replies: 8
Views: 3362

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:20 am   Subject: Aetiee #1
Myeh - I don't think the '#' hash is that bad to be honest with you. But then, I'm far more lax than most of the readers here.
  Topic: Aetiee #1
Jillybean

Replies: 8
Views: 3362

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:06 pm   Subject: Aetiee #1
This read like the beginning of someone's future memoirs. It's like the excerpt chapter being sent round for promotional purposes. It was a short but very enjoyable read. Your very informal style (wit ...
  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - Touchdown
Jillybean

Replies: 8
Views: 4362

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 3:13 pm   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Touchdown
For all those who haven't read it before - and for those who need to catch up - this is what I remember of the plot so far.

Orna 'Fulsamee is the only son of a mother with no apparent lineage and a ...
  Topic: The Councilor-prologue-
Jillybean

Replies: 10
Views: 2833

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:05 pm   Subject: The Councilor-prologue-
You did Solitude good Smile

Nice beginnings, and lots of description, well done.
  Topic: Backwater Rescue
Jillybean

Replies: 4
Views: 2308

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:58 pm   Subject: Backwater Rescue
Ah! Funnily enough, I made a conscious choice not to. I can't remember what it was now, but I did go back through it and take out all the spelled out numbers.

And I really can't remember why . . ...
  Topic: Backwater Rescue
Jillybean

Replies: 4
Views: 2308

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:30 pm   Subject: Backwater Rescue
lol - told you it was unedited!
  Topic: Society - The Hunting Dome
Jillybean

Replies: 10
Views: 5664

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 3:13 pm   Subject: Society - The Hunting Dome
Syotica - bollocks, did I leave one of the 'Brutes' in? I thought I'd got them all. Ahh well.

And yes, the reason for using the spears was traditional. 'Talsamee's party were going to use plasma ...
  Topic: The Priestess and the Warrior - The Heretic and the Revoluti
Jillybean

Replies: 30
Views: 9237

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 12:36 pm   Subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - The Heretic and the Revoluti
Glad you liked Smile
  Topic: An Unngoy Life: Chapter 36: Here They Come!
Jillybean

Replies: 11
Views: 4167

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 2:16 pm   Subject: An Unngoy Life: Chapter 36: Here They Come!
It certainly is a long series!

For future reference the character 'Crystal Lian' will now be referred to as 'Krystal Lee'. If you look back through previous chapters its all been changed.
  Topic: The Twelve Night Siege
Jillybean

Replies: 33
Views: 14076

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 11:51 pm   Subject: The Twelve Night Siege
I'd have to get Bungie's permission to publish it and I don't think they're willing, but thanks anyway Smile
 
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