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  Topic: Limbs
Harbringer352

Replies: 2
Views: 5059

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:52 am   Subject: Limbs
Thank you for the tips! I've been without proper critiques for a while, so this will really help me shape up.
  Topic: Half-Life
Harbringer352

Replies: 9
Views: 9751

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:25 am   Subject: Half-Life
What I love about this is that you maintained the fact that John is a living legend, but also human, and without deviating from his stoic personality. Fantastic style as always.
  Topic: White Daffodils
Harbringer352

Replies: 4
Views: 4052

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:52 pm   Subject: White Daffodils
Thanks Very Happy

In regards to my Forerunner series, I don't really know when I'll start it. It's going to take longer than strictly necessary (because I want the series to be my last honest-to-God fan ...
  Topic: Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay
Harbringer352

Replies: 4
Views: 2710

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:41 pm   Subject: Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay
Wonderful writing. Nice descriptions without being over-the-top about it. Characters are believable and likeable. Though, isn't 'towards' supposed to be 'toward'? Just a thought.
  Topic: The Triumphant Return of the Fic Pick of the Week (11 June)
Harbringer352

Replies: 8
Views: 6826

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 3:52 am   Subject: The Triumphant Return of the Fic Pick of the Week (11 June)
Wow. You clearly worked long and hard on this. I particularly appreciate the 'artistic rendering'.
  Topic: Noble Team: Origins (Part 1)
Harbringer352

Replies: 9
Views: 4714

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:57 pm   Subject: Noble Team: Origins (Part 1)
I like your name, it's fun to say.

On to the story.

I really did like this. Nice descriptions without dropping the imagery bomb, points to the Meister. But I have to agree with the others... a l ...
  Topic: What Once was Ours, chapter 8
Harbringer352

Replies: 4
Views: 2196

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 3:36 pm   Subject: What Once was Ours, chapter 8
Ooh, that's playing dirty, Stacker. Great chapter, Trommer!
  Topic: Time I
Harbringer352

Replies: 5
Views: 2731

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 5:18 pm   Subject: Time I
Oh, and nice to meet you, Wolf.
  Topic: Time I
Harbringer352

Replies: 5
Views: 2731

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 4:39 pm   Subject: Time I
Sorry.

I liked this. It had a full, satisfactory feeling to it. Plus the language was good, and I didn't spot any GPS errors. So good job. Very Happy
  Topic: Glorifying War
Harbringer352

Replies: 3
Views: 2702

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 12:45 am   Subject: Glorifying War
Thank you for reviewing again, Arthur! It really helps. Like the last one, these are 'filler' fics, I guess... just stalling until I find a series to start. But thanks! Very Happy
  Topic: Glorifying War
Harbringer352

Replies: 3
Views: 2702

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 7:39 pm   Subject: Glorifying War
Okay, my vocabulary for this was overdone - I read the thesaurus the other day and my brain is up-chucking words. Aye?
  Topic: A Review With Catherine Halsey
Harbringer352

Replies: 5
Views: 3825

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 11:09 pm   Subject: A Review With Catherine Halsey
Thank you for reading this, Arthur. I appreciate your feedback. I've worked on my dialogue, descriptions (the excessive amounts of it), and storyline, but I've never checked out my OCs. Thank you for ...
  Topic: A Review With Catherine Halsey
Harbringer352

Replies: 5
Views: 3825

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 3:17 am   Subject: A Review With Catherine Halsey
Ha, thanks. Thanks for reviewing.
  Topic: A Review With Catherine Halsey
Harbringer352

Replies: 5
Views: 3825

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 3:24 pm   Subject: A Review With Catherine Halsey
GREAT SCOTT, this is what happens when I write stories after Finals. My brain resorts to endless feedback loops. Ergo, I used the wrong whatsit of 'there'.

...There bodies were modified over the ex ...
  Topic: Comprehension
Harbringer352

Replies: 1
Views: 1778

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:56 pm   Subject: Comprehension
Ah, I recognize this. No GPS errors, formatting looks good, pleasant one-shot to read. Good Job!
 
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