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  Topic: Halo Origins: Prologue
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 17
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PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:42 pm   Subject: Halo Origins: Prologue
A modification I'd suggest against the usage of a new Soviet Union is simply expanding on the Koslovics which, from what I can surmise from the official timeline, are a Khmer Rouge-like, military-orie ...
  Topic: Halo Origins: Prologue
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 17
Views: 6268

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:14 am   Subject: Halo Origins: Prologue
Al ot of times I have stuff to say but I bite my tongue and I move on and if I read something that has anomalies, I at least try to employ the "crap sandwich."

Now to defend my stance ye ...
  Topic: Halo Origins: Prologue
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 17
Views: 6268

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:50 am   Subject: Halo Origins: Prologue
Hey now. Arthur gave advice that you don't like, sure, but he did so without malice and only as suggestions for improvement. He, and pretty much everyone else on this site, is just trying to help yo ...
  Topic: Halo Origins: Prologue
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 17
Views: 6268

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 2:52 am   Subject: Halo Origins: Prologue
Seriously Arthur,

If you find this without enough context to the real world you can look away from the computer screen and stare out of a window into the real world because I hate to ruin it but th ...
  Topic: Halo Origins: Prologue
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 17
Views: 6268

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:44 pm   Subject: Halo Origins: Prologue


Now for the problem: the plot seems rather flawed. I highly doubt the Soviet Union, in anything remotely resembling its pre-1989 days, could appear again. While modern Russia is suspended precario ...
  Topic: It's All Grunty Fun and Games...
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 7
Views: 2693

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:16 pm   Subject: It's All Grunty Fun and Games...
This story was most amusing, indeed. For a moment I was going thinking that the grunts would have motioned for the brute to have been slain by the Chief and they triumphantly finished the job, but goo ...
  Topic: Fan Fic Pick of the Week for July 3, 2009
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 7
Views: 5913

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:40 am   Subject: Fan Fic Pick of the Week for July 3, 2009
Damn! Honourable Mention again.....oh well, hopefully my epilogue will fare better.

Congrats to the tied winners, may you guys enjoy the podium like Conjoined twins, lol.
  Topic: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 5
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 2
Views: 1326

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 7:34 pm   Subject: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 5
Chapter 5? Could've sworn that you were much farther along than that.

I skipped chapter 5 way back yonder, and I got around to writing it now, and I was able to pull it off because chapters 4 and ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (May 8th)
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 8
Views: 5078

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 5:38 am   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (May 8th)
Wow, just wow.
  Topic: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 11
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 4
Views: 1825

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 5:10 am   Subject: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 11
Don't. Try italics instead.

This has to do with ones writing style, and personally as I probably have stated in one of my defenses in an earlier chapter, I use italics for reminiscence and reflecti ...
  Topic: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 11
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 4
Views: 1825

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 5:30 pm   Subject: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 11


Seriously, try and go a little easier on it next time.

It is for the mood and situation. Personally, I tend to only use capslock when the character is showing rage.
  Topic: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 11
Views: 3889

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:13 pm   Subject: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
Damn, I feel something that I cannot put my finger on.

I succumb to your awesomeness.
  Topic: Fan Fic Pick of the Week (April 3)
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 9
Views: 6473

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:13 pm   Subject: Fan Fic Pick of the Week (April 3)
Well, this wasn't the best review to read after a calc exam, lol.

I don't get what you meant by the following, Azrael:

It's the characters, stupid

Are you calling me, my character or both st ...
  Topic: Project: PEGASUS; Revelation
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 3
Views: 2248

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:16 pm   Subject: Project: PEGASUS; Revelation
Well,

SeverianofUrth said most of what had to be said, but the advice I can offer you is proofread and that in itself can go a long way. Personally when I do it, I wait a few days then I go back to ...
  Topic: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 9
Enth Darkness Triumphant

Replies: 8
Views: 2787

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 3:44 am   Subject: Halo Clone Wars: Chapter 9
I like how these threads basically become chat threads for you two after a while.

You really just keep improving with each story you write. You seem to be getting a knack for vivid description, wh ...
 
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