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  Topic: The King's Robes - Grand Prize
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Replies: 4
Views: 9942

PostForum: HBOFF Contest Forum   Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 7:48 am   Subject: The King's Robes - Grand Prize
First fic I've read in a while, and I've gotta say this piece was well deserving of first place. Now let's hope we're not viewed as elitists. Hah, just kidding, fuck 'em. Laughing
  Topic: Of (Some) Consequence
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Replies: 8
Views: 2500

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:49 am   Subject: Of (Some) Consequence
Poor, fat Anna... now what's going to happen to her?
Simple and moving. I didn't care that they executed the girl right then and there... humanity is fighting a war, no? No time to bother with dese ...
  Topic: The Day Before Tomorrow: Part 7
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Replies: 8
Views: 2621

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 4:10 am   Subject: The Day Before Tomorrow: Part 7
It's not that I've been avoiding commenting on your series, I've just been afraid to tackle it ever since seeing it for the first time (at Part 3 or 4?). Hey, I never said it was a good excuse!

An ...
  Topic: Scoop - Chapter One: Downed
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Replies: 14
Views: 3991

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 4:33 am   Subject: Scoop - Chapter One: Downed
I really enjoyed this fresh take on the same world. Believable characters, realistic descriptions, and a solid introduction into a story with lots of potential.

The attitude of the journalist is e ...
  Topic: Angel
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Replies: 7
Views: 2295

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 7:43 am   Subject: Angel
That's perfectly understandable... I don't expect to bring my poetry to a writing site and expect personal interpretation upon personal interpretation. This was basically to show you I was still acti ...
  Topic: A Painted Rocket - From Tulane
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Replies: 7
Views: 3288

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 6:43 am   Subject: A Painted Rocket - From Tulane
First time reading your stuff, and I've got to say I am pleasantly surprised. Chalk up another talented writer to the HBOFF roster!

I love your style already. Your intro paragraph pulled me right ...
  Topic: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part II
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Replies: 10
Views: 3128

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:50 am   Subject: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part II
I too agree with the hastiness of the romance... 'love' is really too big of a word to be using in a two part story. Hell, I just read some Nora Roberts vampire trilogy (vampires being the ONLY reaso ...
  Topic: Angel
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Replies: 7
Views: 2295

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:07 pm   Subject: Angel
Yeah, a hip-hop/rap fan here. But real shit, not like Lil' Wayne or 50 like you so accurately stated.

It's funny, I remember when I first started writing out poetry I was so blind to flow and met ...
  Topic: Brightly Colored Soldiers
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Replies: 13
Views: 3386

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:56 pm   Subject: Brightly Colored Soldiers
A purgatory of this calibur would be horrible.

I liked this, at first glance you're I was just like 'oh nice a multiplayer fic by Sev, this will be interesting' and then realized as each person rel ...
  Topic: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
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Replies: 11
Views: 3214

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 4:18 am   Subject: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
Really, really well done. The description rivals that of any published author I have read, and similarly sucked me into the story within the first couple sentences. You (or whomever) did a great job ...
  Topic: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
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Replies: 11
Views: 3214

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:26 pm   Subject: Reveille, A Halo Fanthology -- Part I
Incredible. Half-way through, but incredible.

Will deliver a fuller review after I finish later this afternoon. Have errands to run, dontchaknow. Wink
  Topic: The Humanist
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Replies: 8
Views: 2637

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:58 am   Subject: The Humanist
This was incredible. Terminatorish, in an AI from Halo way.
  Topic: So, We Lost.
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Replies: 16
Views: 3714

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:53 am   Subject: So, We Lost.
I love how you can tackle the Halo-universe in an original, concise manner and execute it in perfect harmony with your Severian self. This was awesome. Optimistically dark. Poor guy.

Oh, and I'v ...
  Topic: master chief and the wang monster
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Replies: 24
Views: 7271

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 3:10 am   Subject: master chief and the wang monster
hahahaha, I could've gone on forever, but I didn't want to make it too obvious. Wink
  Topic: master chief and the wang monster
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Replies: 24
Views: 7271

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:13 am   Subject: master chief and the wang monster
I'm sorry, I just couldn't seem to get a firm grip on this story.
It just kinda rubbed me the wrong way.
I basically exploded with fear of what was to come next.
Next time, author, lets put our he ...
 
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