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  Topic: Seven Days: Conclusion
Chuckles

Replies: 4
Views: 2136

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:25 am   Subject: Seven Days: Conclusion
A surprisingly consistent tone for a story written in short chapters over several years. It started pitch black and somehow managed to end that way as well. And with plenty of pitch black in between. ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
Chuckles

Replies: 18
Views: 11334

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 9:02 pm   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (October 9)
I think it would be a mistake to start anything resembling a "worst of the week" category. That isn't what Fic Pick is about. Heck, it's the opposite of what it's about. I am aware that some ...
  Topic: BUMPER SPECIAL Fic Pick of the Week (w/e 2 October)
Chuckles

Replies: 16
Views: 10708

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:04 am   Subject: BUMPER SPECIAL Fic Pick of the Week (w/e 2 October)
I'm with Azrael, Eb. Nicely done.
  Topic: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
Chuckles

Replies: 11
Views: 4881

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:35 am   Subject: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
eb4642 wrote: Yikes, Chuckles... this is evil, plain and simple. Unmitigated, terrifying, chilling... evil. I didn't think it was possible for something to be more twisted than some of Sev's work... b ...
  Topic: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
Chuckles

Replies: 11
Views: 4881

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:00 am   Subject: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
Arthur wrote:My favorite scene, though, was the dream sequence. I really felt like I was there. It was described at just the right level, leaving it indistinct enough to allow the bleariness of a drea ...
  Topic: Waiting for the Dawn
Chuckles

Replies: 7
Views: 3386

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:22 am   Subject: Waiting for the Dawn
I'm impressed by how confidently you handle the sci-fi jargon in this chapter. Here's a bit I thought was good:"We've just received a data dump from a Slipspace probe that was in deep space, and ...
  Topic: We March!
Chuckles

Replies: 2
Views: 1538

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:36 am   Subject: We March!
Not bad. There's a heightened risk of silliness in video game based poetry, but you avoid it quite well. Like 14th wonder, I prefer meter with my rhyme, but I still enjoyed this.

C.T. Clown
  Topic: The Day Before Tomorrow: Part 8
Chuckles

Replies: 5
Views: 2316

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:01 am   Subject: The Day Before Tomorrow: Part 8
Weaving the flashback into the story worked well. Good way to focus the reader's mind on the person in distress without having everyone standing around talking about how much he meant to them. Michael ...
  Topic: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
Chuckles

Replies: 11
Views: 4881

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:46 am   Subject: Nai Gor (chapter two): Painkiller
Sorry this took so long. The next chapter will be up much quicker, I promise. In fact, I have it about 90% completed in my head and am on vacation (at home) this week. So I hope to get the majority of ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week – August 28, 2009
Chuckles

Replies: 4
Views: 4249

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:28 am   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week – August 28, 2009
Thanks for the pick and kind words, Kr. Congrats to Azrael and eb. I'll be reading and reviewing your stories in the next day or so. I have the week off, so I'll have time.

kr-1426 wrote:
The on ...
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (July 24)
Chuckles

Replies: 3
Views: 3474

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:07 am   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (July 24)
Even though we had five submissions this week, three of them were for the same series, so we really had only three authors competing for this week’s Pick. All three were excellent. All three had good ...
  Topic: Eating Jackals
Chuckles

Replies: 18
Views: 4741

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:02 am   Subject: Eating Jackals
One of the things that makes your stuff so readable is your use of details. Nothing sounds made up. Odd facts come at the reader out of where in the heck did he come up with THAT? Here's an example:
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  Topic: So Terribly Amusing
Chuckles

Replies: 11
Views: 3314

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:24 am   Subject: So Terribly Amusing
Well, I'm not trying to go 'dark' or whatever--these just seem to happen. I actually didn't see it as a very dark piece, more like a little packet of words about the absurdity of their situation.
I w ...
  Topic: So Terribly Amusing
Chuckles

Replies: 11
Views: 3314

PostForum: Fan Fiction Comments   Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:04 pm   Subject: So Terribly Amusing
Reminds me of a line by Daniel Craig in Road to Perdition. Pretty good for a handful of words, but when did you start making things so dark?

C.T. Clown
  Topic: Fic Pick of the Week (May 29)
Chuckles

Replies: 7
Views: 4877

PostForum: Fan Fiction Reviews   Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 11:06 pm   Subject: Fic Pick of the Week (May 29)
Sev wrote: Not gonna lie, I wasn't the biggest fan of Master Chief's letter--but I'm not the reviewer today ...
The reviewer had a problem with it too. It is an obvious plot device with no reason to ...
 
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